BobMcBobinton / Comments

It's perfectly okay. :) No hard feelings!

Yah, everyone's fine. We're just kind of homeless atm...

I changed the rules and you don't have to make your own layout or have the picture now! :) Wanna join?

Oh, that was a stupid thing to ask, your profile SAYS you're from Australia.
*idiot*

You in Australia?
And thanks, I'll try.
I actually burnt down my house a few days after I sent you the last message... sooo, haha.

I would love to read your story, but I am just so swamped right now with other crap that's taking up way too much of my time. Summer just started here and my little brother and sister are pretty much going to be staying with us... and all of my friends are out of school now.

If you'll be patient with me, I will get around to reading your story eventually, I'm just honestly too busy to committ to it just now.

Thanks xDD
I'm so glad that it's easier in this version for you to get to know and enjoy Eleanor, that was my main problem the first time, I think. There's still quite a few parts that I rush through, cause I haven't quite discovered how to make everything flow, but I think this version's a bit easier to follow ^^

And yah, Eleanor iiis melodramatic and selfish, but that's how I want her to be. xD - I like writing characters that aren't absolutely perfect and have real personality flaws.
It's a little harder to do, but way more fun, I think ^^

Alright, the first chapter is posted under 'Eleanor In Ruins', I changed the name... cause... well, let's face it. Take Me Away for a contest called Take Me Away is just unoriginal xD

Check it out ^^ let me know what you think.

Haha, I have the horrible habit of dreaming everything I really want to happen in real life... and waking up and thinking it's happened, lol. I can go for like hours thinking that it was real until something reminds me that no... it couldn't have happened. And life sucks again, lmao.

I'm rewriting my story at the moment, I'm into the third chapter now, when I've finished, I was wondering if you'd look it over and tell me if you saw more personality for the characters.

I'm working on incorporating a few different parts of the story that I had originally left out for ease of writing, I guess... so I could put it out without having to really think out and evolve the plan very much, you know?

Bad idea, but it happens.
Would you like to read it when I've finished?

You're welcome, and I hope you get more comments on your story. Put it out there so people can read it! I'm glad I could help and if you need anything else just ask me :)

Haha! ^^
I think everyone gets a bit 'bipolar' when they're just rolling out of bed... especially after they've just had a kickass dream that they were so rudely ripped out of...
Grr to that.
Grr indeed.

Eh, I'm sorry that I blew up on you.
I'm bipolar and I tend to freak the fuck out sometimes, haha... I guess the honesty of your comment in regards to my characters having limited personalities etc was just too much for me to deal with earlier today.

There's just so much that's been on my plate recently, that I haven't really had the time to do as much as I'd like with my story and realizing that this, my favorite story that I've written in years, isn't even my best work right now... was a little tough.

Either way, I shouldn't have freaked out on you the way I did.

I do respect your honesty and criticism and appreciate the fact that you enjoyed my story, even with its current faults.

Sorry again for flipping out.

Personally, I don't think that having Eldonia be a figment of her imagination would be any more original than having it exist, ESPECIALLY because you're not the 'original' person to suggest it to me.

I don't like that idea and I don't think that it's original at all. I want it to be happy in the end.

I understand what you mean and agree that there are scenes that still need filling out and when I take it down and rewrite it to send to a publisher, I fully intend on elaborating on things I left out.

I'm not going to lie, your review really offended me.

You don't suggest a fucking ending for someone else's story without expecting them to be a little pissed off about it.

Thank you for the review and I hope you have a pleasant day -.-

thanks, BobMcBobinton

Mary-sue???

Not much aii what did you do after you got back?

Hey, thanks for the comment! Also, my grandmother (mom's side) could listen to a car and almost always pinpoint whats wrong with it, so could my grandfather (dad's side) and my uncle. But almost always is the key word that I used because I know you can't always. :) And yes, my character is sadly underdeveloped. I was babysitting yesterday so I let my cousin help me write it. She's 8 and fancies herself to be a writer when she grows up so I let her help.

But back to the story:

My story is a bit cliche so far, isn't it? I know it seems that way but there are other aspects that will be explored later on. I write a story like a mason builds a house, set the foundation one brick at a time and then begin the fancy towers and chimneys. And I won't tell how but it actually ends highly original.

But last and certainly not least, thank you for the criticism and the comment and thank you for taking the time to check it out!

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