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  • wandering.soul.

    wandering.soul. (100)

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    Hi,
    thanks for the feedback, could you maybe help me out, tell me where the mistakes are, please.
    January 18th, 2010 at 08:51pm
  • homeXwrecker

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    Hey, I really like your story.
    I think i like Scott more than jack though.
    Jacks kinda like a big brother haha.
    Hmm keep up the good work.
    January 18th, 2010 at 03:08pm
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