I'm sorry Amanda, do you mind if I get to your story later? My mom is mad at me because I have to go up to bed early. Do you mind if I read comment tomorrow?
By the way, I finished up a Dialogue guide. I hope that covers any and all questions you could ever hope to have about it lol. If it doesn't though, I will add more.
Actually, that's an entirely different verb tense. (I remember from painstakingly making a chart for verbs in middle school XP) The name for it totally eludes me at the moment, but I will definately work on it!
Hi, this is Aya responding to your journal comment! Give me a couple days, and I will try to have new parts to my Guide. :) (I'd try to get it to you quicker, but sadly school keeps me busy..)
Can you explain/give an example of what you mean by double-verbs?
On one of your journals, you mentioned a key thing to writing would be "showing" not "telling."
My question is, can you explain that a bit more?
I've gotten a few people saying that to me and it drives me nuts because I can never seem to do it >_<
Thanks for hosting the contest! ^^ I read through your comment, and I agree. I didn't put the same effort into the story as I did for most of the others, mainly because of stress. All in all, I know I deserved the place I got. As for the name coincidence, I didn't notice until you pointed it out. XD When I named the character, I was thinking of Florence, Italy. P= Anyway. Thanks again! And thanks for the comments. :] Have a lovely day!
Thank-you for your comment.
I did not get offended, and I will try to improve in the future :)
English is my second language, so I am not really good at this xD
Thank you first of all, for making the contest, giving me the opportunity to enter, and thank you so much for choosing me for second place!!!!! I was so happy that I placed that I screeched in the school library! That was embarrassing, but I didn't care, because you liked my story so much!
Then I come on today and see your comments and I'm so glad that I entered your contest! I think I fixed most of the problems w/layouts, (thanks for the link and the tips, by the way!) and I love that you like the way I write! I love talking to people and hearing exactly what they like and what they don't, and I love how your comments were thought out and meaningful!
Thank you once again! It means a lot to me!
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It'd be cool to see ya enter :)