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  • Audioblue

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    Hey :) Just wondering if you wanna check out my new contest?
    http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/post/8603662/#8603662
    It'd be cool to see ya enter :)
    October 11th, 2010 at 04:35pm
  • iaras

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    Thanks for the story comment!
    c:
    October 10th, 2010 at 04:02am
  • DragonxFox

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    Thanks!!!
    I modified the layout a tiny bit, but it's gorgeous =P
    October 9th, 2010 at 02:33am
  • DragonxFox

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    can you tell me how you did the link for comments on your profile page?
    Please?
    October 9th, 2010 at 12:31am
  • purple haze.

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    thank you for the birthday wishes :)
    sorry this is late, i have only just noticed them!
    xx
    October 7th, 2010 at 09:25pm
  • Jewel Nicole

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    How are you?! :)
    October 7th, 2010 at 06:43am
  • crowning.

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    I'm sorry Amanda, do you mind if I get to your story later? My mom is mad at me because I have to go up to bed early. Do you mind if I read comment tomorrow?
    October 7th, 2010 at 04:39am
  • Chaos Sisters

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    By the way, I finished up a Dialogue guide. I hope that covers any and all questions you could ever hope to have about it lol. If it doesn't though, I will add more.

    Happy writing!
    October 6th, 2010 at 11:19pm
  • Chaos Sisters

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    Actually, that's an entirely different verb tense. (I remember from painstakingly making a chart for verbs in middle school XP) The name for it totally eludes me at the moment, but I will definately work on it!
    October 6th, 2010 at 11:16pm
  • Chaos Sisters

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    Hi, this is Aya responding to your journal comment! Give me a couple days, and I will try to have new parts to my Guide. :) (I'd try to get it to you quicker, but sadly school keeps me busy..)

    Can you explain/give an example of what you mean by double-verbs?
    October 6th, 2010 at 10:13pm
  • alexandra.

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    ahahaha 'hamanamanaman' that made me laugh.
    thanks so much!!
    October 6th, 2010 at 03:54pm
  • DragonxFox

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    On one of your journals, you mentioned a key thing to writing would be "showing" not "telling."
    My question is, can you explain that a bit more?
    I've gotten a few people saying that to me and it drives me nuts because I can never seem to do it >_<
    October 6th, 2010 at 04:32am
  • mazohyst

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    Thanks for hosting the contest! ^^ I read through your comment, and I agree. I didn't put the same effort into the story as I did for most of the others, mainly because of stress. All in all, I know I deserved the place I got. As for the name coincidence, I didn't notice until you pointed it out. XD When I named the character, I was thinking of Florence, Italy. P= Anyway. Thanks again! And thanks for the comments. :] Have a lovely day!
    October 6th, 2010 at 02:27am
  • Isadora Pierce

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    Aw, that means a lot to me, the fact that you said it's one of my best. <3 Thanks so much, Amanda. (;
    October 6th, 2010 at 01:15am
  • moikay way.

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    I learned that I should not take things like that to offense.
    Like you said, you were just trying to help and I thank you for it.
    October 6th, 2010 at 12:23am
  • moikay way.

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    Thank-you for your comment.
    I did not get offended, and I will try to improve in the future :)
    English is my second language, so I am not really good at this xD
    October 6th, 2010 at 12:09am
  • electroscope

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    Hey! I just wanted to drop by and tell you that your comment on my story was very much appreciated. :) I'm updating lots now!
    October 5th, 2010 at 11:12pm
  • iaras

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    Thank you for the story comment! <3
    October 4th, 2010 at 09:44pm
  • the woman.

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    Thank you first of all, for making the contest, giving me the opportunity to enter, and thank you so much for choosing me for second place!!!!! I was so happy that I placed that I screeched in the school library! That was embarrassing, but I didn't care, because you liked my story so much!
    Then I come on today and see your comments and I'm so glad that I entered your contest! I think I fixed most of the problems w/layouts, (thanks for the link and the tips, by the way!) and I love that you like the way I write! I love talking to people and hearing exactly what they like and what they don't, and I love how your comments were thought out and meaningful!
    Thank you once again! It means a lot to me!
    October 3rd, 2010 at 10:12pm
  • aubree james.

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    Catherine Doll came up with the title, I know, it just wreaks of originality.
    October 3rd, 2010 at 01:24am