You have two typos on your page. 'Have' is spelled wrong twice, and ironically enough, one of the times is in your sentence offering your services for revision.
just thought you'd like to know. :)
Omg I absolutely LOVE your story!!! XD it was one of the best I've ever read. And a great plot twist based on the beauty and the beast!!! :D you should write fairy tales for teens!!! :D
just thought you'd like to know. :)