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I had bad days over trivial matters. Your profile opened up my eyes again, please don't ever change those words.. They are beautiful.

:)

thanx for the commet =^.^=

thank you.
xxxx

hey, i saw that u were kinda sticking up for me when u commented that guy back when he called me "ugly". um, thanks. and btw- anything mean i said in the rhymes were for pure competition, i don't even know you to say that! so i just hope u don't think i meant it. and fairly-ur raps were better, u won =) thanks againn.
xoxo
sars

heya
thanks for the comments on my poems.
im glad you like them.
and your ones of writing on the spot are realllly good.
xx

listen to the words is completely impossible,
my ears begin to bleed take me to the hospital,
its poison to my senses,
give me a fuckin break!
That shits nothing but musics hell fate.
the rappers get one hit and wheel you in with that bait,
dare u compare rock and rap,
my minds on the right road sharp as a tack.
you on the other hand, im not too sure,
your shit sounds like garbage from the street whore.

At school huh?
did ya have fun?
any students threaten ur ass with a gun?
I was at school too,
from home,
i am cybered schooled,
to get in you can't be dumb.
Guess you couldnt make it in,
too bad,
on second thought, i'm glad.
Your right,
these arn't raps,
its poetry,
I don't do rap,
its got no bounce
its flat.
A bunch of mumbled words,
consisting of girls taking off thier shirts,
I don't listen to that shit,
but according to your spelling,
your a perfect fit. :)

I see u gave in,
i knew i would win,
challenging me was nothing but a sin.

Thanks for the poem comment! I love the pics on your profile. :D

Thanks for the pic comments...I love your profile!
xo

you think your better cuz' u use big words?
bitch, its ashame they mean nothing more then turds.
I'm back and better then ever,
I'm dropping the beats much heavier then your feathers.
your rhymes ain't got nothing,
thier just like rock,
weathering against mine,
against the clock.

Its about time,
i was begining to think u forefit ur rhymes.
mine decrease?
honey, urs have been deceased,
I'm kicking your ass,
your walking on broken glass,
your coming in the competition last.
the clocks struck three,
the field of dreams is waiting for me
its been a good fight,
now i say good-night,
but don't worry,
I'll finish this in the morning light.

ur acting too proud to have grown up there,
the streets are trashed, some are bare,
carrying around a gun?
oh that sounds like fun,
have fun in jail,
and u say i'm done?
bitch this game has only just begun.

Thats cuz' I don't have a pimp,
I don't need a dime,
It's just talent to know how to rhyme.
Talent you lack,
so pick up the slack,
as far as i'm concerned,
you better watch your back.

damn thats lame,
you can't evey play this game,
let alone win,
ur brain needs to be hit with a metal tin,
something to get it going,
thats what you need,
to be better then me,
u need the skill and the speed.

roadkill?
oh no, not I,
I'm not the one thats going to die.
my rhymes are origional,
so not the same,
thats why i am going to win this game.
don't matter where ya grew up,
as long as its not word viomit your throwing up.
step aside or run and hide,
however u want to loose,
you decide

come on slowpoke,
bring them faster than that,
i thought u said u know how to rap

laying on the road,
yes maybe,
but demolished?
no sur-ey.
Give me your best,
I'll see if u can past the past,
if u do good for you,
and if u dnt,
which u won;t,
ya better get going,
cuz' more beats i'll be throwing.

thanks for commenting my poems!!

yes! i have noticed that. Simple things like that just show that the person's too lazy to put apostrophes in or capitalize or check if they spelled it right. It makes it seem like they really don't care.....