Oh, I fully understand! When I make my comments, I try to generally hit every point possible, you know, to make it a special comment for that story and not a generic one. So I understand. C:
And what I meant by that is the spacing between the paragraphs. The words are okay, but the paragraphs being so close together sometimes bothers me. It's not that big of a deal, it just throws me off at times when I pause to do something, then try to find my place again, or some times I miss sentences. My vision just might be really bad, though. = 3=
I'm sorry I took so long, but I've finally judged my teen Issues contes. Check it out to see where you've placed!
http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/157146/9/
thanks for your story comment!
i know, i was looking for anything having to do with softball and all i found was an a7x fan-fic, which really isn't my style. so i was like, screw it, i'll write my own!
I'm only 14, but I'll be turning 15 this summer. (:
I'm glad you like it so much, I revise everything a million times. I'm a little bit of a perfectionist. >.>
And what I meant by that is the spacing between the paragraphs. The words are okay, but the paragraphs being so close together sometimes bothers me. It's not that big of a deal, it just throws me off at times when I pause to do something, then try to find my place again, or some times I miss sentences. My vision just might be really bad, though. = 3=