Haha, if you want to, but it really isn't that good. :\
It needs some major editinggg. I have only read Chapter 1 of yours, but about to read the other, so far, very intriguing, and an original plot. :))
Hey. :)
I am quite enjoying it, people are so friendly... hahaa. I got like 30 comments in 2 days, just welcoming mee. :P
But yeah.. Its good. How are you? x
Hopefully it'll be out.