Thanks for the welcome :) And also for the comment, did you really like it? I'm looking for as much feedback as I can as I go, so anything is welcome :)
haha your welcome...the same things definately happened to me before. It looked perfectly fine on my screen but people kept telling me it was too hard to read. :)
Oh yeah I know what you mean though I usually have the opposite problem - I have an idea for a sequel when I'm only a chapter in to the story! It's so annoying!
No probs :) I hate it when good stories don't get recignition and then cr*p ones do - it aint fair :) Well I think you should definitely do a sequel to Watch Over You (and I hope Lola and Michael get it on ;))
Your MJ story is amazing, way better than most of the MJ rubbish on here. How do you not have any comments? I really don't understand :S There are some AWFUL MJ stories on here with loads of comments :S I'll pimp you on my MJ stories xD Hope you do a sequel!