DarlingggLover / Comments

Thank you very much for the story comment.
Yeah, everyone seems to like Poppy. Haha.

Thanks ton for your comment! I'm glad you liked it, especially because you didn't think you would. :) I've got seven chapters written and now I'm typing, editing, and posting. Feel free to read more if you want. It always pleases me to know that others enjoy what I do. ^^

I'm very interested to know why you didn't like Rock Of Ages.

You're quite welcome.
I chose this story, in order to use it as an example, and since I found a few samples to point at, it worked out well. It's your story, so in the end, it's still your call, your responsibility. Just like it's your glorry/shame, depenidn of how well the story came out, when it's finished.
Culture and location, just like names and other characteristics of the characters is what gicve the reader something to see. Someone to feel for, no matter who the character is.
You're right, I need to pull out commas as well as other punctuatuion from my story.
Punctuation, commas, and the others, are like the other letters of your alphabet.
The better you're at using them, the more the reader enjoy to read your story. The better the image you try to convey, the more the reader connect to the story, both characters, scenario and whatother message you may choose to put forth.

I think this is a good example, explaining, in a small part, what I tried to say.

If every change I suggested feels right for you, is entirely up to you. What you need to do, is simply to consider the options presented, by my suggestions. What if you choose an entoirely different change, I had not suggested? So long as it's better, then the original had been before I came along, "You Win".
It's that simple. We're all blind to our own mistakes, that's why I'm partaking in the 'Comment Swap', even though I like to have people read it in general.

Just look at what was suggested, enjoy the new view on your story, make the most of it, while it last. Then you may have someone else suggesting something, giving you a new perspective, once more.

The swap works becuase wou, I and everyone else give a constructive critique of the story we're given.
You're free to like, dislike, hate, or love it, it's your opinion. I don't mind if it's included.
Just so long that I get, what the swap is all about. I'm sure you'd feel the same, when you get a comment, that doesn't help you improving your story, because it lack the depth, the clarity, that help you to see, what you can improve.
A refference, to where and what is wrong, pointiing to what's the problem, showing that you actually red the story. (a single chapter is enough, just ask the admin, for confirmation, if you like?)
The easiest way to see how a comment came out, would most likely be if you read it, as if it had been your story. does it feel as if it had helped you? If you can honestly say that it had helped you, it most likelöy is good. If not, the best thing is to try again, you're free to comment as many tames as it takes, to say what needs to be said, for the comment to count.
Even if the initial reaction is positicve, or negative on an oppinion, but it rarely help you improve the story.
Hope I'm making some sence, even though I feel overly wordy right now, which I don't like to.

Thanks for the comment on "Eponey - the Millenium Bug".
Would you care to explain what's confusing, and what chapter you red?
No refference, and no quotes from the text.
Ending with something that sounds good?
Furthermore, I find it overly wordy. maybe something to consider, both in comments, and in stories, since I have to assume you have written at least one, taking part in "Comment Swap"?
I really hope your story doesn't feelas thin as this comment I got from you?

Oh yay! ^.^

No problemo, not at all. (: And you know, I understand with the editing. Sometimes I just don't even want to reread it. Especially if it's a chapter I have to force out my butt.

I can't wait for more of yours! :D

Thank you so much for your comment on Hotel. I'm glad someone likes it. It's not done yet, but it's drawing to a close. Also, I just started this morning on putting the character name in the chapter title because I just realized this morning that it wasn't clear. I hope that helps.

Thank you for the comment. I am very happy that my writing was.. effective.. (is that the word..?) enough that you liked the story even if you didn't think you would. There is the saying never judge a book by its cover... lol. And trust me I am searching for a beta (or editor) every day, but I haven't had any luck.

Anyways, thank you for your comment. You rock and I hope you continue reading and enjoy the future chapter of Hush, Yael.

Hey there,

How are you? Thank you so much for the story comment. I really appreciated everything you had to say. I'm so happy you think it's not like every other story you've read -- that makes me incredibly happy. And, I don't want to spoil the reveal for you, but you're definitely moving in the right direction. *wink, wink haha

Thank you so much again!

-Belle

Thank you sooo much for the story comment!!! I totally appreciate it! :D And yes, my sentiments for Mr. Lacoste is pure hatred as well -_-

Thanks so much for the comment! I hope you find the rewrite to be much better :)

Sorry I didn't reply! ^^; Anyways, there were actually more guys dressed like girls than I though. One guy was actually wearing a skirt, a tank top and a jacket over it, boots, and mascara! XD A guy named Dillan kept saying he was Dill-ina and he was talking in a weird voice and kept saying," That's valley girl speak" XD

Thanks for the comment... haha Ya.. Ryan was a liar haha :D

HAHAH thanks for the story comment... no it wasn't too long... too long comments make me sleep at the end and you kept me giggling...
oh! and ya i haven't been in the hospital... my sis has but she doesnt talk about it much... and my mom is a nurse? how come i dont know this? i just didnt bother haha. :D
And it's okay if you dont like Ryan... (I dont either...) WHO SAID THAT ?! haha jk jk

Oh that's okay, I haven't even been on mibba until now. I thought I should check for new messages. Wow, you got engaged? Just...just wow. o.O

I've been on a different site, http://www.deviantart.com/, so I haven't been on mibba much. But I still come back just to talk to my friends. :3

Nothing much lately. Oh except tomorrow is opposite gender day at school. It's where you dress up like the other gender. It's so easy for girls to dress like guys but not for guys to dress like girls. I'm waiting to see how many guys actually DO dress like girls. I'm gonna wear one a white shirt with one of my brother's see through jackets and a clip on tie. Cool huh? XD

Aaaw! I'm so glad I was able to make your day. n_n
That story deserves way more views and comments, seriously.

haha... :D THANKS for the story comment... makes me smile with joy (which is the only thing smiles should come with) that you missed the story!
once again... SO SORRY i just been super busy... :D and wginormous amount of a writers block but thats cleared away :D

I'm great too! Thanks for asking! That sucks about your friend! :'(
I had a friend that moved somewhere else in U.S but kind of faraway from me. I know how you must feel (even though your friends are farther away).

Anyways, what's new?