Last Words Unspoken / Comments

Haha, I wouldn't be surprised either. He's already got their children's living arrangements planned, so it wouldn't be far fetched at all :)

Well, you'll have to wait and see! I'm glad he's on the back of your mind though, everyone else has seemed to have forgotten.

Oh, lucky you! I have my vacation in two weeks... I'm very excited!

Hey! So, I have a question... Since you read the Temporary series, what do you think about a sequel to Temporary Life?

you're welcome :)

Lmao...nice profile picture...Were did you get the saying? ;)

Lol good!

Haha, I think you're right there. Matt definately does have anger issues. Considering the amount of people he's hurt... I'd say you're definately right :)


I couldn't resist calling him 'Big guy'. Too good an opportunity to pass up!


I agree with you there, he is planning a bit far ahead. Damn, he better get a date soon ;)


You're the first one to remember about that guy! Don't worry, I havem't forgotten about him!

And as for the money thing, I think I mentioned in there that when his parents died, they left him a heap of money. So basically, he doesn't like to work, so he doesn't.

Very good point. And if he did, I don't think Mel would be too happy.

Haha, that made me laugh. He probably did!

Thanks so much for yet another great comment! I really appreciate it! Well, hopefully it will stop being busy soon, and I hope the same goes for you!

Wow, really. Well, it is a nice name :)

Right. Threats never get you anywhere. Well, except maybe jail depending on what you said and where x]

Same here. It's one thing to encourage comments, but it's an entirely different thing to threaten people with never updated again without them :|

No problem :) and I get what you mean, I write my stories for myself too. And I don't force comments because personally, when an author demands comments I refuse to comment x]
But even bad stories have multiple comments so I don't see why yours doesn't have more considering it's actually good.

Lol, I'm in love with it too!

How you been?

awesome i cant wait! =)

That's great! =)
I'll probably post the first chapter up tonight or tomorrow, so, maybe you could start by checking that out?

I would love that!
I don't mind criticism, really. I feel that it helps me become a better writer as well. That, and it's only for the good of the story, really.
So, you're okay with helping me, right? =)

Marty... the band manager? The balding guy? I hated him haha :)

I know, he was. Glad I met your creepy standards!

Haha, I do that all the time! My mind runs off on me during class, and I just completely zone out. Not good, seeing as I have exams coming up :S

I'm sure it'll be fun. It'll be my first festival so I'm psyched! And SAT"s I had this provincial french test this year and math one last year which sucked, hopefully it'll be better next year. And have fun at the concert cant wait to hear their new album. And I'm sure the next chapt will be awesome no matter how long we'll have to wait for the next post :)

Deffinitly, it doesn't really seem jumpy or anything like that. Really 'flowing'.
Yeah me too, I ignore when it tries to tell me that the name is wrong just te other day it tried to tell me Valary's name is wrong <_< dumb spell check.
Oh really three times? lol

Oh man, I was too. I had like, every album. I hated that Marty guy on the show though, he always annoyed me lol. I miss that show too!

Count Chocola? I'm guessing that's a breakfast cereal, not a vampire? Haha xD Yeah, Matt's creepiness wasn't quite enough. I wanted to go off the charts with creepiness.

I know, you summed it up perfectly. He thinks he's doing what's right.

Haha, I do!

I've got to figure it out. Don't worry, I usually have random bursts of inspiration before bed, so it should hopefully be out soon!

Really? I really appreciate that, then!

Haha yeah, I don't get to see them twice, i just said both days cause' it's a festival, where I get to see most of my fave bands! Mwahaha <3 And sure I'll tell you how awesome they are :) And yeahh that's awesome my school year shall finish in about 5 weeks then exams and after im off to eleventh grade :\ Anyways You're very welcome for the story comment. And I get those too! The last minute thing that can just blow the story into a better place ... yepp that sounds perfect. so I'm excited to read the next chapter :)

You used to watch S Club 7? Me too! I didn't think anyone else really did haha :)
I just had to add it in... it was in my head!

I laughed at the Count Creepula thing too.... even though I wrote it.

Haha, probably. That would make a lot of sense.

Grid was a creep. I felt the story was lacking some serious creeps, so I had to add one in :D

Mhm, poor Matty! He's a bit of a weirdo, but a sweet weirdo at that!

Haha, I lol'd at that comment. It probably is how teenagers get kidnapped nowadays...

You think he'll kill him? I'm not quite sure what to do with him yet ;)

Thanks so much for your comment! I always look forward to them because you always go into so much detail! I'm glad you're still enjoying it!

(By the way, every time I look at your signature I smile. It's so awesome that you have that quote in there!)

check my poem 'song' out that is titled gone away if ya can,its suppose to be about a strong love,and one has to leave bkuz of war,idk, just thought I'd let ya know. ;P oh, and dont 4get about saying happy mothers day 2 mothers u know(that u can stand,lolz) I'm saying that 2 every mother I can stand,even my own, what a shame,lmfao,but yeah,lol.

Oh damn that's pretty fast. I mean you're now at chapter 12 and you were nearly finished by chapter 12 in your first version. That really damn fast
Deffinitly it's would have been to difficult to just fill it up, I mean the action was pretty much set in stone
Yeah damn spell chech sucks, but it's getting my writing mistakes that I don't get like my spelling, so I just ignore when he trys to tell me that Zee's name is wrong