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  • Modern.Sunshine

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    Or you can just let imagination run wild and just write the sequal now. Like, in one of my stories I followed a real timeline creating stuff as I went a long. But writing the sequel I realized I didn't really like that band anymore so I thought of them as orignal characters it's going pretty well right now. when ever you decide to make the sequel message me! :3
    May 25th, 2012 at 11:40am
  • celestial_royalty

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    yeah, slash really kinda sorta freaks me out ;]
    March 2nd, 2011 at 01:46am
  • celestial_royalty

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    OMG IS I NEVER TOLD YOU A SLASH?! WARNING PLEASE!!!
    March 1st, 2011 at 08:41pm
  • celestial_royalty

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    you actually misspelled Eleanor quite a few times- it became quite a trend ;P I just mentioned Eleabot because that was the funkiest! of course I'll take a look at your stories- check mine out too! although the two I really really don't think you should read are Pursuing Passion and Loving A Shape-Shifting Werewolf- please wait til I edit! I wrote them when I was 14 and have been too lazy to fix them *sighs*

    No guarantees with your other stories though- aren't they celebrity ones? I actually haven't ever gotten into that, but I promised my friend I'd write her a James Franco one so....idk
    March 1st, 2011 at 08:20pm
  • celestial_royalty

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    dude...in chapter 14, you wrote "eleabot" instead of "eleanor" LMAO
    March 1st, 2011 at 09:14am
  • celestial_royalty

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    For Make My Heart Feel Safe...

    Chapter 8 just breaks my heart, I swear I’m near to tears. I love Seth and Eleanor so much, and I really like Lucky, Jameson and Xara. I’m so disappointed in Jacob and Leah- I can’t believe that after all this time, they don’t have the decency to keep their mouths shut. I do want to know what Paul’s problem is, exactly- please don’t tell me he’s gay with a crush on Seth…

    I’ll be posting chapter comments on here and give an overall one in the comments section later. I usually hate Bella, so you did a good job of portraying her. The whole Eleanor’s-father-knows-everyone is definitely a bit weird and confusing, but since they know everyone, it’s not hard to keep track of the one-or-so person they don’t know because they know everybody!
    March 1st, 2011 at 08:51am
  • WrittenWords

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    Sorry for the late response. Thanks so much for the comment =) it was really sweet. and I know! I always thought they were cute together too. Thanks again! Update soon on ur stories too! Im addicted to ur writing
    November 4th, 2010 at 11:57pm
  • weasleychick09

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    Sorry about the delay in response! I had no idea you even sent me a comment! haha.... anyway yeah I have lived in Hobart practically my whole life! I just graduated in '09! That is pretty awesome that your aunt lives here and you have actually been to Hobart! I haven't met too many people that have heard of it let alone been here! :)
    August 25th, 2010 at 03:17am
  • sophianyx10

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    I hope it doesn't but people are stupid. and Yeah I do (ReaderWriterFilmaker)! I'm like just about everywhere. It's rediculous! and I hate viruses. I think I have one thats causing my computer to crash...It' really irking me!
    August 15th, 2010 at 07:57am
  • sophianyx10

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    You're on fanfiction.net too!? are you under the same name as here?
    August 15th, 2010 at 06:44am
  • sophianyx10

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    You know, it sucks when you have the story but you just can't seem to write it out.
    July 30th, 2010 at 09:00pm
  • sophianyx10

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    *MAJOR GASP!* I just thought of something awesome! Thank You! Thank You!! THANK YOU!!!! :D
    July 29th, 2010 at 10:56am
  • sophianyx10

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    *sigh* well i'm stuck...I got the whole Samu-Ellie-first-publicity-date thing where all they're doing id just going around the town keeping it simple but being seen by all the paps...and idk what to do after that...
    July 29th, 2010 at 10:13am
  • sophianyx10

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    HAHA It just came to me lol :D But my Taylor aint doing too well *in strong southern accent*...well the ending is (it's going to be pretty awesome and heartbreaking...kinda) but i can't seem to get the middle done. I just want to hurry up and get to the ending already!! lol :D *leans in and whispers in ear* There's gonna be a sequal. Shhh don't tell anyone lol :D
    July 29th, 2010 at 05:26am
  • sophianyx10

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    well I was thinking that like at the after party Taylor see's Booboo across the way but Booboo doesn't see him (man his name is starting to get irritating lol :D) and like the entire time Taylor is trying to get over to Booboo but he keeps getting pulled away for photos and by everyone else and when he finally gets a chance to freely walk over to Booboo (i'm going to start using his last name from now on lol) It's too late because Stewart left

    OOOOORRRR!!!!

    Taylor gets over to where Stewart is and sees him making out in a corner with someone else, goes in a jealous rage but before he can make a scene Stewart and his Beau (see what I did there? Used Beau's name as an adjective lol I crack myself up. okay enough *slaps own face*) get up and leave? I have no idea where all of that came from lol :D
    July 29th, 2010 at 01:18am
  • sophianyx10

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    I highly recommend it! :D so how's the sequal going?
    July 28th, 2010 at 11:35pm
  • sophianyx10

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    No actually that's where I got that saying from. I just edited it a bit :D It originally said "I loves Harpo, Lord knows I do, but I'l kill him dead befo I let him beat me!" It's a great movie you should watch it :D
    July 28th, 2010 at 02:54am
  • sophianyx10

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    You are very much welcome! just remember that this is my own personal oninion and you don't have to listen to a word I've said! :D
    July 19th, 2010 at 11:04am
  • sophianyx10

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    Yeah but I think you can strech it out to theme maybe three shapters...the song just has that kind of feel to it :D
    July 19th, 2010 at 06:26am
  • sophianyx10

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    oooohhhh I thought you meant you already made a banner with that title lol :D but in my own personal opinion (that you don't have to listen to at all) i'd go with the first title becuse (even though I don't know how the story is going to go) I think it would fit (how I'm thinking the story will go) better :D
    July 19th, 2010 at 12:16am