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  • Tyrving180

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    Oh, yes, I also completed yet another chapter to my story. :]
    June 5th, 2010 at 06:50pm
  • Tyrving180

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    Hello, it's me! Heh. Don't be silly, I appreciate the advice from ALL my readers, both young and old. Now, to address some of your concerns:

    1. Thorn having an accent.
    I had actually given thought to giving Thorn accent, but I couldn't quite find an accent that would fit an Elf. Originally, I had planned to have her speak in perfect english, as in, she doesn't use contractions, and she would've drawn out her sentences in a prose-like manner. But, I decided to ditch giving her an accent, because I personally felt that by giving her a "perfect english" accent, it wouldn't have given her very much personality, and I would think my readers would get annoyed by reading such long, drawn-out sentences.

    2. Thorn's family befriending a Dwarf.
    Why not? Besides, when I wrote Adventurer's Log, I intended it to be a simple, fun, adventure story. So, I don't plan on bogging down the plot with Elven lore or Dwarven Lore, nor will I go on and on about the history and/or the creation of the world. And the way I see it, it's no different from say, a Hispanic family befriending an Asian family.

    3.The layout.
    A friend of mine is making me a layout, be she's been very busy, and I won't be expecting it for a while.

    4.Spacing my dialogue.
    Eh, I have nothing. :]

    Keep in mind that I am NOT shooting down your advice, FAR from it. I'm simply explaining where I'm coming from and why I wrote the way I chose to. I still appreciate the criticism. :] I'd love it if you were to reply with your own "counter-thoughts". Heh. :]
    June 2nd, 2010 at 07:09am
  • stallion ducky;

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    There is three months until the deadline of my Summer Playlist contest. (:
    June 1st, 2010 at 09:16pm
  • MeetMeInNeverland

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    http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/155806/2/
    Hey Its past the 'complicated love story comp' deadline but you have until friday to get your entry in. Please let me know asap if you want to drop out or if your going to give one in
    May 31st, 2010 at 07:14am
  • oh bear

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    Hey, I just wanted you to know that the deadline for my character contest is in twenty days. (:
    May 29th, 2010 at 10:02am
  • eclipsed.by.glory;;

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    hey, i never received your entry for my contest. i will let you have one more extension, if you would like it, until tomorrow night. i really would like to get the chance to read your writing.
    May 26th, 2010 at 05:12pm
  • alexander bernadotte

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    Hi (:
    Your entry for my phobia [http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/155061/] is due on May 31st, which means as of tomorrow, you have one week to complete it. If you need an extension on the due date, please let me know.
    Also, if you need to drop out, I’ll understand.
    If you changed your name, please let me know who you were before and I’ll change it on the thread (:
    Can’t wait to see your entry! <3
    May 24th, 2010 at 08:11am
  • eclipsed.by.glory;;

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    hey girl. i just wanted to remind you that your one-shot entry for my 'the worst pick up lines of all time' contest is due by midnight [eastern time] on SATURDAY. if you need another day or so to write it, please let me know ASAP so i don't disqualify you okay? i can't wait to read it YAY.
    May 17th, 2010 at 01:05am
  • wonho

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    Hi, just dropping by to let you know that the deadline for my Pick A Picture Contest has been set for [b]June 11th[/b]. If you think you'll need to drop out or get an extension, please let me know as soon as possible. :) Here's a link to the thread if you need it:

    http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/156031
    May 13th, 2010 at 11:42pm
  • vintage hearts;

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    Both contests, that is :D
    May 9th, 2010 at 06:42pm
  • vintage hearts;

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    Hey! My contest ends tomorrow, and I was just hoping you were ready. If not, let me know if you need another day, okay? Thanks
    May 9th, 2010 at 06:39pm
  • vintage hearts;

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    Hey, thanks for entering both my contests! Please let me know when your stories are done, or if you need more time, okay?
    May 6th, 2010 at 01:00am
  • vintage hearts;

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    Hi!
    Just wanted to remind you that you entered my Six Word Contest earlier this month. I extended the deadline to the 10th, just in case. Let me know if there are any problems ASAP, and please send in your story soon!
    Thanks
    April 30th, 2010 at 11:50pm
  • warren the ape.

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    The winners for my Bad Romance contest have been announced(:
    http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/post/6820878/#6820878
    April 25th, 2010 at 03:13pm
  • PENNAMEDUDE

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    no i do not
    April 8th, 2010 at 05:52am
  • my.world.is.weirdish

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    thanks 4 commenting on my story!! :3
    love u 4 it!!
    March 7th, 2010 at 02:37pm
  • lynnarddxx

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    thank you so much!! :]
    February 15th, 2010 at 06:55am
  • warren the ape.

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    I <3 Madeleine :)
    Lol, I just felt like commenting xD
    January 21st, 2010 at 10:44pm
  • emmyvlin

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    ooooohhh im #2....im soooooo cool!!!!!
    December 10th, 2009 at 11:04pm
  • warren the ape.

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    Welcome to Mibba!
    Yay first commentor :D
    December 2nd, 2009 at 10:52pm