hah it was cheesy, but good cheesy and i like it alot/ btw i love your writing skills. .... so don't mind me,(: i'll just be reading your other stories:)
Hey, your chapter in Better Left Unread. I know what you mean when you wrote "I try to ignore it, but it hurts not even looking at you in the eyes. It hurts period. " I am constentally trying not to look at him.
P.S. It looks fine. I did my chapters all on the phone. Just letting it all out. :)