kimmykins21 / Comments

thanks for the advice. I don't think you were being rude or mean I know you were being honest and everything you said was right so thanks!

oh yeah, because next thing i know, the people from the story read it and are like WTF?!?! so yeah, your welcome! [:

i'm glad my story inspired you!..I'm not sure how it did, but i'm glad I could help! :D

thanks for the comment!

no problemo :) it seems interesting for sure :D

h'okay :D

no problem :D

Okay. First off, I like your story. Its a good start :D
But, you need to edit the format of the story.
When a person is speaking, it is a new paragraph. This makes it neater. Grammer and punctation always helps too

thanks for the add!

So you like Just My Luck right? Well then you might like You're One of a Kind too. So yeah, read and comment and stuff. <3 ;D

http://stories.mibba.com/read/280437/Youre-One-of-a-Kind/

thanks for the comment :D

thank you(:

Haha, I think everyone has wanted to punch her for awhile. :)
Thanks for commenting on muh story!

Thanks for commenting my story. (:

Thanks for being hooked to my story. Haha. x)
And for commenting!