i just got This Side Of Paradise and i really want to know what you guys think of it! i haven't been writing for...i don't even know, but i want some feed back on it. some critiquing would be nice just try to be gentle about it please? like if you hate it, DON'T be like "omg, that was a piece of crap!" anyway i just needed somethings to say just so i can post this journal! comment on it and i'll...