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  • ChoTrev2009

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    Damn you Dion!!! Just re-read and rediscover the story. Then write down the plot, a list of ALL the characters, even the ones who haven't appeared yet, and a description of how everything plays out so you won't forget and can write easier!!
    August 1st, 2010 at 06:21pm
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    Get back on the horse and start writing for Nightside of Eden again or I'll fucking go insane!!! I need to edit something that isn't mine or I'll start eh next genocide!! The genocide of all stupid people in the world!! IQ of less than 125 is illegal!!!
    August 1st, 2010 at 05:54am
  • Airheart.101

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    HAHAxD I know, I read and commented the story as diligently as before. You're such a pimp aren't ya?:]
    April 18th, 2010 at 03:12pm
  • ChoTrev2009

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    If I may, you might want to fix the spacing in Chapter 1. First impressions are important, and if the first chapter looks bundled and difficult to read, people might think the rest looks that way too.

    Just a thought.
    April 18th, 2010 at 08:46am
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    Yeah, I have been going off of Kay's reaction and your actions in New Blood. It has been taken a little farther, but it's to make something later seem that much more sinister. You'll see, and I think you'll like it.
    April 18th, 2010 at 04:01am
  • Airheart.101

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    Ahhh... In that case I'll just have to wait for the explanation:]
    and yes! ANOTHER story comment! YaaayXD
    April 4th, 2010 at 10:38am
  • Airheart.101

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    Sweet:D I can't wait for the update! Good idea to have him check it over... I screw up grammatically a lot if my friend doesn't help out with the editing.
    March 24th, 2010 at 12:59pm
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    hi5! Chocolate pwns, and chocolate chip cookies is just pure bliss... *sighs contently* Alright, now just keep writing!
    I like reading the About Section:) Its usually pretty interesting... A marmoset is a type of monkey idiot;D
    March 23rd, 2010 at 01:20pm
  • Airheart.101

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    Hi Jenny!xD
    You're very welcome, I'm looking forward to reading it a ton then! Well that makes a ton more sense now, and I don't give a fuck that you're rusty as long as the plot stays as interesting the whole way through:) I hope you update soon too! If you do I'll give you a cyber chocolate chip cookie or whatever desert you like:) So hurry!
    March 22nd, 2010 at 01:55pm
  • AnnaBum

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    no problemo :)

    he's also the reason why i read it, thumbs up for him!

    ill be counting down the days for the next update so here's a invisible internet lollipop.
    March 22nd, 2010 at 02:10am
  • ChoTrev2009

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    Read them!!! And no, no tacos for Dion! Waffles instead, with plenty of syrup!
    December 10th, 2009 at 06:51am
  • Perfectly Imperfect

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    Shenanigans! Don't read my stories! They're not done yet!
    December 10th, 2009 at 06:11am