I send my deep apologies for the delay. As I am fairly sure that everyone would like an explanation to my absence; I will leave it at the saying of it being a personal issue. Once again I am deeply sorry for the delay and the anxious, well possible anxious and curious wait I have left for the contestants of my contest.
Results are finally up:
http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/159721/
(on the final comment, seeing as for some reason I am not able to edit my post)
But you're a year younger than me, and I could really learn a lot from your writing :) Mine is too jumbly and descriptive, your writing is fluent and controlled. I really like it :)
Aww thankyou ^-^ Yeah, 'A Greater Wave' felt a lot more real because it's quite a raw, fresh subject. Literally just sat down, furiously typed how I felt, improved the adjectives and sent it off to be beta'd. Even the dream was real, but I wish it wasn't >< I bet people think I'm crazy, though, with the whole "I want to kill the person who killed you" thing xD Thankyou for yet ANOTHER wonderful comment :D
I appreciated it :) I changed what you suggested about the layout, can you see the links better now? I made them a darkish blue colour :) and I also changed the story title to the background colour, can you still see it or is it all okay now?
Oh, my god. I was literally thinking "I wish I had some mean comments, I need to learn whats bad about my stories," and you gave me one! :D But it wasn't mean, it was so, so constructive. Thankyou, I really appreciate it! And I'm really neurotic about my story layouts, so it's good that you pointed out the things that I missed. And I do agree with you on the adjectives, that's what a lot of people say about my stories >< I'm definitely going to try to tone it down from now on - "less is more", yadda yadda yadda ;) Thankyou for subscribing and bothering to comment, every time i see those numbers go up its such a confidence boost :D & thankyou for being my first "mean" comment and for being honest! :)
hiii!
and thanks for the story comment!
i'm glad you're back. your writing is fantastic and i will have a look at the new stuff that you've posted when i have some more time.
(:
Well that's more than me. XP And uh...I don't think I've ever believed in monsters under my bed, but after I watched Jurassic Park when I was like 4, I was convinced that dinosaurs were going to eat us all whenever it rained at night.