Francois Arouet / Comments

alrighty then....cool

Okay thanks! I will go back and do that

heyy
long time no comment.
when are you planning to put some more poems and stuff up??

Yeah, I know :P It's for a contest so I didn't try super hard to make an extraordinary plot. Do you have any suggestions I can do to make it better? I would love critisism, but no one ever gives it me ya know.

heyy how are you?

Thank you for reviewing. I'm going to make a new layout for it because I personally didn't like that one much either.
Sadly, that was my story edited by a beta reader so I'm probably going to have to get someone who looks more at punctuation since that seems to be a real problem with me.
And I really appreciate you being the "bad guy"

While "THAT WAS THE BEST THING EVER!!" is an ego booster I post my stories to improve them and get helpful criticism and enjoy it when people do correct my mistakes.

Thank you so much.
:D

**random comment**
heyy :)

hey how are you?

LOL I have absolutely no idea whatsoever at all.
O_____o
I rock at fictional writing, but essays... ugh.
they're another thing entirely.
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and lol i just got back - it's not that bad.
for now.
cos it's the new school year here in S'pore - our school has a standard 3-day orientation.
i.e. run around playing games and no homework.
but thursday onward's gonna be torture.
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you're in band?
what instrument do you play?

yeah no kidding - twilight SUCKS!
(sorry. i hate it. edward is the ugliest thing I've ever seen. and he looks constantly constipated)

and yeah, inkheart's plot is different, but the writing... nah. :/
ANYWAYS.
what's up?

yesh it wasn't that nice - I don't really get the appeal of inkheart.
or twilight.
:/
lol. it's always warm her. -shudders-
pretty boring.
:(
it's school on monday there?

LOL oh yeah.
it's winter there, no?
aww that sucks.
well.
it's better than the weather here.
it rains for five minutes, stops for another five, and rains again.
stupid GW.
-glares-
:X

and you lucky freak!
-jealous face-
we have a two-day orientation at the beginning of school to get used to our new classmates after streaming, but still.
waking up at 6 is boring.

and ahh.
that.
the one written by the Inkheart author?
Cornelia Funke?

oh yeah.
what book were you reading?

LOL
eh. it's 12.03pm now - i just got back from swimming.
going to the library later and we have a band concert today - it's till 10 and we have school tomorrow. at 8.
chicken buttock.
%$#@! (see? my words are so vulgar they can't come out as words)
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hey i'm emily. so whats up?

heyy how was your day?
(Happy 2O1O, btw. (not.))

of course i'll tell you when i repost my story :D
oh, and it's 2010 where i am, has been for almost an hour. so happy new year!

Thank you SO much for your review.
It was full of great feedback and meaningful comments, and that's something new to me.
I'll ask Audrey T. about the characters thing. I put it in because it's so hard to keep all the Basterds straight.

:D well thank you for that poem comment. Its VERY much appreciated

Hi! I was reading some of your stuff and liked it a lot. So i added you :D