nickjonas0508 / Comments

I read the first few chapters. :D

I like the idea, but there are some grammatical things you need to improve. Everytime someone new talks, it's a new paragraph. With this, your chapters will seem a lot longer.

I still haven't had the time to sit down and read the whole thing. I'm planning on it tomorrow. :)

You should add your story here. :)

I started working on one, then I realized I'd updated a day or so before. I'm waiting this one out.

Thanks. :)

Which ones do you like?

Hey, thanks for the add. :)

I'm Kim.