It's not that I was disappointed with the story, merely the chapter. In case you failed to read the comment. I was merely pointing out that the one chapter seemed very disconnected to the rest of the story, and backing up my opinion so you could improve. If your going to come back and bitch to me and not take my advice than I simply won't comment again, and if you read back over previous comments you'll know I was a large fan of your story. Trust me, take any advice in now that you recieve with no hostility because it'll make your writing better.
hai... ehm... i just wanted to say that i loooooooove the 'which mcr character are you most like' thing on ur profile... and i'm stealing itXD if u made it imma put u as the author though XD <3