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Trying to fo something justice is all any author hopes to do. For example I'm writing a Doctor Who fan fic I'm just hoping that I do it justice.

Thank you! Someone finally gets it! I would hug you except it would be awkward and weird and I barely know you and I don't know where you are, I'm rambelin on again.

lol. awesome stick figures! xD

And by the way, I LOVE those stick figure pictures!! They made me crack up! >.<

I'm so glad you think the same about Bruce. The stories I've read portray him as a man whore, which he really isn't. Just cause he has a woman around his arms doesn't necessarily mean that he's sleeping with her. And I agree with you, I love his deeper side too. No, you didn't give away much. Lol. But I can't wait to see what you have planned for us!! And trust me, I'll be checking everyday for an update.

I absolutely youre "In the mind of madness" story!

In the last chapter you wrote you'd like more constructive feedback.
So here's mine.
I like the way you write in the 3 person. It makes a story nicer to read when you write "Kenna felt tears comming down' instead of "i felt"etc.
I love the way you describe every conversation that takes part in your story.
Especially Kenna's character and "your" joker is amazing.
Even thought he is one of the mail character, he doesnt lose his wicked side!
Some "romance him" to much, do you get what i mean (i DO love some romance, dont get me wrong).

Something you could work on more (in my opinion) is to describe the places with more details. Like in chapter 42, when they "flew" to an office building and inside that building. What does it look like.
Describing even the most simple things, (the description of the toilet Kenna talked to Bruce) makes a story so much more complete!

Keep on writing, i can't wait for an update!

I really love your joker story, its amazing. Keep up the good work. :)

You are one of the few people I've come across who hasn't said they hate him. Ha.

I completely agree! I usually try to be good about it, especially if I like the story that much, but sometimes with work, college, and my own updates, I forget. ^.^

:3 Well thank mew!
Yes, I may be just a tad bit obsessed with Sam....

And I will most definitely keep reading!
I usually check periodically, due to neglecting my e-mail, but if yo ever update and don't happen to see a comment from me after the first few days, feel free to poke me and remind me. :3

No problem.

i know i changed it :/ i might change it back but i thought my profile needed color it was so black an white :O

billa?

How do you get the bad ass backgrounds??

dude stfu u have PLENTY of friends and ik mom is stupid...doesnt mean i am!

You should continue In The Mind of Madness. It's a really good story!

i really, really like the story God Only Knows (I think that's what it's called?)

I love, hope you update soon

Black Betty is Amazing!! I love it! Its one of those stories that captivatied my attention right away and I am hooked Keep writing its fantastic!

No problem!
And I will keep on reading, don't worry!
I'm hooked. He heh. x}

UGH thank you sooo much :) it means so much.

Thanks for the story comment! I really appreciate it =)