Okay. That makes sense. That's kinda like when I try to do present tense and then switch back to past tense. I stop adding "ed" and the past tense stuff and have go through and fix it all. As for the posting on here thing you said, that's an excellent reason for doing so.
Oooh! I'm a fan girl. :DDD That's awsome. And its really sweet that she is.
Hey everyone, sorry but im going to be gone for a week or two. Im sure ill be back for a few days when i get to visit again, sucks that i dont actually have internet at my own house huh. Anyways as usuall ill use the time im gone to write and update my stories, when i come back expect updates for Oh, Teacher..., Dragon Wings, and Possibly a new special story we will see if i have time for that one
Yeah I do think your stories are that good. The plot lines are really amazing and well thought out and I'm enticed by them. Is the writing Shakespear? Not yet but for your age and as being that you're an unpublished writer then it's really good. They'd need editting before being submitted to a publisher, but I personally have a strong appreciation for them and feel that I am able to connect with the characters even though what I've read so far isn't in the first person and are actually third person omnicisent.
Yeah. I've noticed that problem with my stories. Not techy stuff, but doctor stuff in my case. It doesnt take tooooo much research. That sounds like a good idea. I think I'm going to read Monster now as well.
I think it sounds really interesting. I like she was built to be his sister, but ends up acting kinda like a mother, but then wants to become his lover, You could really work that story. Just make sure when the doctors still around that you throw in techy sounding words. If you know the lingo and are able to confuse people a little bit with it, youre in. haha. :) But yeah. I think that would be a great story and if you posted it, I would definately read it.
Just finished it. It was really good. I enjoy the creativity behind your writing. Makes me smile to see someone passionate about writing and who does the same flakey things sometimes for the same reasons as I do (your profile). You're going on my list of fav Mibba writers fo sho. :)