Just as a little thank you, I read and reviewed your story. Just a warning, I do include as much constructive criticism as possible- just because complimenting what you're already good at doesn't help you as much as a writer. And I do hope I managed to help you :]
I like your outfit in your picture. :] you're so pretty!!! cute style. hi! I'm Mathia and I just wrote a Twilight story called Smile When Your Heart Breaks, featuring Paul!!! Please take a look~ and I also finished an Edward oneshot called Damsel In Distress, which is mostly a comedy. Or it's meant to be- tell me if you think it's funny [= I have problems with that- nobody ever seems to understand my humor...=/
I put up my first Harry Potter fic here as well and I have a lot of others- VD, Original, a7x, lots! Please let me kno if you like <3