SadieJBlue / Comments

Thank you very much for commenting on my story, Still Screams!

Yes, thanks for catching that error in the summary. I was going to write one more chapter on the characters to develop them more . . . Would that help? At first, this story was supposed to be a one-shot, and when I started writing, I found the words just pouring out. Hehe . . .

Anyways, I'm going to keep going with the story, but am going to divulge more information about the characters along the way.

Yes, there is a lack of a cliffhanger. I do intend to revise it, and rack my brain in order to keep the readers on the edge (if that is even possible for me as I am quite new at writing horror)! I don't know how exactly to improve it as of now, but I am certainly going to try!

Your suggestions are greatly appreciated!

Thanks Again!

~ Verona :)

Thank you very much for recommending, and commenting on my story: Falling for a Slave! It means a lot! STORY DELETED!!!

Thanks for the comment! (: I'm glad you enjoyed it.

-Joe

Thanks for your comment, that story is only a one shot though. It won't be continued.

Thank you so much for your comments on my WW1 story 'I've Got Your Back', I'm glad you liked it and really appreciated your kindness :)
I hope you carry on reading the story, I put a new chapter up today in fact that you may be interested in reading? Hopefully you will xx

Hello again! Thank you for the comment on Stray. I didn't win the contest. To be honest, I unofficially dropped out, although it's still ongoing, I think...? I'm not sure.

The pacing wasn't entirely intentional, but as a piece of work it's more an exploration of faith then a story, I guess? I don't know, but nothing really happens. Maybe the third chapter'll contain an epiphany, but maybe not. Either way, it's still slow :')

On the whole summary thing, do you think it'd be okay to put an excerpt from the story in? Or a verse of the song, as it is a songfic?

thank you for the comment, subscription and recommendation on the writer and her muse, we're glad you enjoyed it. perhaps our new york is a tad different and not so glamorous because we're both new yorkers. i dunno. a place stops being cool when you've been there your whole life.
-X

Thanks so much for the comment! I originally wrote this story Beside the Fire for a contest entry and kept it all in one chapter, but thank you so much for the advice on breaking it up. I'll be sure to do that after the contest is over.

I'm really glad that you liked it so much! Thank you for the feedback. :)

Thanks so much for the comment! I originally wrote this story for a contest entry Beside the Fire and kept it all in one chapter, but thank you so much for the advice on breaking it up. I'll be sure to do that after the contest is over.

I'm really glad that you liked it so much! Thank you for the feedback. :)

Thanks so much for the comment/recc/sub on Camp Opalescent, it means a lot. (:

I'm glad you like long chapters, because so do I! It really unnerves me when a chapter is like a few paragraphs long. I try to make my chapters around 7 or more pages, like an actual book.

Thank you for the comment :) it made me really happy.

Ahh, I'm glad you like the layout. The only other feedback I got on it was from my mum, and she only okayed the background because she liked the pattern X'D

I'm really aware of how short the chapters are, but I don't think I could make them longer- I'm scared of ruining the atmosphere of the scene or making it fillerish and unnecessary, which I don't think fits with the story. (It's a silly story in that respect: I've left one of the most important events out of it entirely )

As for the summary... I get this a lot. I just am really crap at summaries, so I tend not to write them I can't put the idea of the story into a few words without telling the actual story. I think my summary would end up more like the original title of Robinson Crusoe :')

Thank you once again for the comment. I'm trying to make the two remaining chapters long (although the one I have stubbornly refuses to have any more added to it, and it's the shortest one yet!!), and I'll try harder with the summary a scary thought :S

Oh wow, I just realized that I commented on your story rather than on your actul comment page, I have no idea why I did that, aha. That was really odd of me. .___.

Anyways, I just wanted to say thanks again for taking it so well and good luck on your future writing endeavors! If there's ever a piece of writing that you feel a little bit unsure about, you can always drop a line by me to give a second opinion! :3

Thanks for the comment on "Necropolis".
As you said, me again*giggles*.
Some more spiritual essence to this part, if you managed to miss it?
Maybe this is another situation, where the free note as sequel does pay, since I can place a separate layout here, like with 'John doe', which I couldn't, in the grander story of Eponey.
Is there any of my stories/chapters you haven't red by now?
Now I just need to figure, just what kind of a Layout would fit, and how to make it, or, whom to make it.
Guess I'll see you soon enough, withthe next story?(yours, or mine?)

Aww you're so welcome!!

No problem! (: Well, with Mob stories comes big risks, you know? Sometimes it's too extreme for people, sometimes people can't handle it. I think you're written yours very well, honestly! UGH I was super upset. Tommy's so sweet :c You've definitely done a good job! I can't wait for the next update. You're welcome!

Oh you're welcome :)
I'm looking forward to reading more.

Thank you so much for your comment on Bloom! It honestly made my day!

Thanks for the comment on "Daih'mon".
You're one busy girl, since you've gotten around to comment this many of the stories/chapters.
I imagine it's basically the same grammar and spelling mistakes?
Now I just need to buy more brushes, and more tubes of worsds, with which to paint.
Hope I'm not contradicting myself, asI leave hints on various places, yet this should be the main position on this particular.
Not sure if you ed the particular chapter(s), where it was mentioned.
There should be more on the subject coming, just not sure where, or when.
So far as I recall, it's in the core of who people are. Maybe it needs to be linked to other chapters along the way. I had the girls exploring who was at the school, by what bracelets they wore. The very same bracelets mentioned here. There are, and will be further hints to this later.

since I've not even red the story for so long, I'm exploring this with you, and everyone else.
Only difference it that I'm the only one who can change the events. or fill in further details, when needed.

I just need a few hints along the way.

Thanks for the comment on "Xenia 2".
I've gone over it, which doesn't mean I can't miss a few details.
There are a few situations that would gain from further details.
I'll keep working on the technicalities, as I keep the story coming.
Just curious, someone must love seeing you comment on this story?
For this reasin, you'd be getting rather familiar with the people and places over time.
Makes for a few very interesting comments.

Thanks for the comment on "John Doe".
Funny, at closer inspection, this particular, have very few revisions.
Maybe I'd make a silly point of an irony, when I finally get a british writer to comment, it's a story in American English, while most writer I see are Americans, and comment on the Queens English stories?
This still doesn't excuse the grammatical short comings.

I made a few changes, mainly grammar errors, to this summary, for now.
When I get to making a second layout, maybe trying something more to the point, for the Agent, in the US, any suggestions?

I'll go over the chapter/story soon, since I have some comments to go on, giving me a greater perspective from which to work.

For this particular part, I wish I had someone who could help me with the local dialect, since I'm closer to Queens English, like in Europe, and Britain.