No problem.
Grammar count is just something I do. I'm glad that you actually mentioned that you'll edit it, though. *minirant* YOU MUST BE A REAL WRITER. Haha. :)
no problem (: it's a great story, really. haha i have a brother so it's like....i can connect with it. and everyone has the sort of friend rosie is at least once in their life, so it's easy to understand and associate themselves with.