It was kinda cocky, wasn't it:P
I liked her reaction though:)
I haven't decided if there will be a bear down, but I can promise something will happen;)
Thank you for the comment:)
hey! thanks so much for that last comment, it was a real help. :)
and i kow just what you mean about the name situation. when a character develops, the name comes to fit them perfectly and its really hard to change them! thats what makes it so hard XD but I need to change at least one name, I think, John or Pat, and last names... sigh. we'll see!
so thank you! and the idea of texas is starting to really get to me, so I may just need your assisstance sometime,thank you for the offer! :)
It got reported for plagiarism three times.
So if someone thinks I stole it then whatever, I'm not going to waste time on it.
I'm sorry if you liked it though:(
It sucks but I didn't have the drive to write it anymore bc of it.
Ahah!
I strive to stay away from cliche's so we'll see what happens;-)
Ahah! When RIan rejects Alex I died!
And at one point in time Jack gave off the evilist look and they like zoomed in on it! I was like 'damnnnnn'
But Jack was such a baby:-P Like when ever someone started puking he freaked out! It gave me several ideas for a one-shot!
But thanks for the comment yours are always the best!
Lol, i like to keep people on there toes:-P
I like contemplated Mallory making an appearnace but idk...I like gotta get a Zack Grayson mind set not a Jack Mallory mind set:-P
Thanks for the comment:-)