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I need your entry in the next two days.

Congradulations! Exceptions From the Rules of Attractions one the place of Honorable Mention in my contest! It was truly great, written fabulously. Thank you so much for entering!

Happy ending, YAY!
I'll definitely read it then haha, I'm a sucker for those.. :3

Oh my God, this can't be good, what about Slipping Away? Can you give me spoilers on that one? Does it have a happy ending? please.. :3

haha, I see. I'm just not good with sad I guess.

Hey, can I send a friend request? :)

Oh, haha. I didn't realize that.

WAAAAAAAAAA, it was sad. :( why yo do dat? lol XD

haha, you're very much welcome! :) Why would that embarrass you though? It was awesome. But I was a bit put off with Make It Stop, that's basically the reason why I didn't comment. WAAAA lagsjdkaskl xD

Yeah, I use direct speech too much. I don't mean to, it just kind of happens. But yeah, it was really nice to read :D very cute >.<

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Please remember that the deadline for my Photo contest is April 30th.
I can take later entries but I would appreciate it if they were in on time.

First of all sorry I haven't answered your comment sooner, but my laptop decided to crash yesterday >_<

Now back to our fun conversation about hair xD Really I love it when you start a conversation with a flykarth story and somehow end up talking about hair! I haven't really thougt about hair telling something about the personality, but you may have a point here! I'm gonna start looking around more and see if your little theory fits the people I see at school :p But I'm pretty obsessed with hair too, I even have an unspoken rule with my boyfriend that he cannot cut his hair really short xD

I totally understund, I don't expect perfectly written stories on this sites, everyone's here to learn. But after my laptop is fixed I'll probably read another one of yours ;)

Haha, every relationship is a love hate relationship if you ask me. But sometimes they really ask for it, mine's too good at poking/tickling too xD

When you mentioned he cut his hair and became ever more ugly I immediately thought of myself. I'm such a hair person. This is gonna sound so stupid, but sometimes I think I fall in love with the hair first, before I fall in love with the person xD (and yes, atl + crew has amazing hair, hence my obsession haha, but really of course I love them for their music)

Awww but I wanted to read some more of your work :( I read the flykart and even made you like it more, so mabye I can make you like another one too. I'm sure they're not that bad, you write really well ! *gives you the puppy eyes to lett me read one of your stories*

And I know school sucks big time, piles of work lately but I always come on here for my break to talk to you and read a one shot ;)

Well, I'm liking the conversation too, so we'll just have to agree on never ending it ;)

Aww we're both lucky with an amazing boyfriend. Although he always teases me and finds some kind of way to unpurposely hurt me everything we meet, but I still couldn't miss him xD I totally get what you mean. I once fell head over heals for this guy who took the same bus as me every morning. To me, he was really really really good looking, nice clothing style, the whole package. But then I started to realise he was the cocky type who picked on people and claimed the "popular seats" on the bus and stuff like that. I didn't care about him anymore after that, made him no longer perfect to me (now I even think he's ugly, but that's also because he changed his look a lot :p). The inner person really means a lot to me, so it can have a big effect on me if you're beautiful inside or not.

Maybe it isalready real life... xD I wish, I wish!!! Maybe I should read one of your other stories without a plot whole just to compare. If only school would stop taking up all my free time >_<

Haha, I guess I'm just not that romantic. I hava a boyfriend myself and I thought he was good looking when I first met him, but he got more beautiful to me when I found out he also had a really nice personality. But what I was wondering, you think a boy is the most beautiful person you've ever seen, but now you say you wouldn't even know if he passed you by now. If he really made such an impression, wouldn't you like remember him? :p I'm being curious and maybe for you annoying with my question xD

Yeah, it was kind of hard not to miss the plot hole. But the one shot didn't really need that much plot anyways so it didn't bother me. Haha, my reaction was certainly not 'if feel bad for you". More something like "why can't this story be real life" xD

Haha, so you're guilty of doing it too! But I get what you mean, some writers have such a nice writing style and rich vocabulary I don't even realise how cliché the story actually is, I just get lost in it. And that personal style is something that can make a writer different from someone else with the same kind of story, only the one writting in a personal/better way gets my attention and the other one loses me after about a chapter or two.

Your fanfic was kind of like that too. I noticed it because it's a Flykart: you score cause there's already enough jalex in the world. And when I started reading it I could of thought "just another one shot were they'll fall in love like it's nothing etc." but I didn't. You wrote it in such a way I was totally lost in the story. I didn't even care if it didn't have that much dept in it and that alex just suddenly loved matt even though he still had his girlfriend. Your writing style made me forget all about that and that's why I loved it too :) It's kind of ridiculous how nervous I was during the elevator part xD It was like I was actually a fly on the wall or something and seeing it all go down xD

I think the right conclusion to make is the following: that teacher just sucks big time and is homephobic to say the least xD And I find boy/girl quite boring too, give me boy/boy over boy/girl anytime.

I think I know what you mean with the stereotypes, it can bother me too. Some things are just written very unrealistic. In the first chapter for example 2 people absolutely hate each others guts to the extreme and in the next chapter they're already deeply in love and can't say a bad thing about each other anymore. I just doesn't work that easy if you ask me :p Oooh and I hate it when people write stuff like: and then Jack saw Alex, the new kid, he was the most beautiful creature he had ever laid eyes on etc. I have yet to see the human being who will make me think things like that, now ever ATL/Matt were able to make me describe them as the most beautiful creature I ever laid eyes on xD Just really, exageration much! :p

It really doesn't make sense, I mean it's not like you made one kill the other or something. Like you said, a suicide story would be something others could be worried about it they don't know the reason behind why you wrote about the subject. But it's just a harmless cute love story, if it would of been girl/guy he would have never said anything if you ask me xD

Yeah, you just have to keep looking and when you're lucky you find that one really well writen fan fic. But a major part of it all have the same kind of storyline so usually I start reading ATL fics, but neaver finish them when I can start predicting what will happen.

And sorry for my superlong comments, sometimes I don't know when to shut up xD

Oh Em Gee, that was indeed pretty awful! Haha, he actually said that what he saw wasn't good? What could possibly be wrong about Flykarth?! I bet the man read the whole thing during that movie and didn't dare to admit he liked it xD

Aww that's sweet. Some online friends are worth more than some real ones, at least in my case :) I'll still keep an eye on you, I'll know it if you start not liking it again...

Yeah, most fanfiction is kind of the same. I still love to read it though, weird xD I found a totally different thought a few days ago, it was ATL who woke up in the saw movie and Jigsaw wanted to "play a game" with them. Pretty cool and original. And I love my new obsession but why is it so hard to find Flykarth stories :( booooeeee internet, give me Flykarth!

Haha, your teacher found it? Were you writing in her lesson or something? Now I'm wondering if she has actually read it and discovered the wonderful world of All Time Low slash xD

She's one lucky friend, having such a lovely story written for her! And that's it, from now on I forbid you to say you don't like it, cause it's AWESOME and you better start loving it too and be proud of yourself for writing it! You have been warned xD

I thought the day would never come but I'm getting a bit bored of Jalex too, Jalex fanfics are all kind of the same. But thanks to your story I now have Flykarth to obsess over ^^

You're welcome :) I meant everything I said!
I see no reason why you wouldn't have like it before
It was a very nice change from all the jalex I read ;)