Haha. Don't worry. You definitely won't be the last person to comment on "It Started with a Bet..." in the long run.
Yeah, it's definitely not very realistic, which is actually what I'm doing right now. Since I'm not updating anything for a while, I'm slowly going through old chapters of ISWAB and trying to make it more realistic. For instance, I'm making it so she doesn't move in with the Chois immediately. I don't plan on changing any of Haley's outbursts or anything that relates very closely to the plot, but yeah. So if you wouldn't mind telling me some of the more unrealistic parts, that would be awesome! I probably won't change all of them, because a lot of people like the story the way it is, but still.
I wouldn't mind considering it at all! Summer's coming up and I'll probably have a little bit of free time. If you could just PM me the idea and maybe we can get to talking about it? I'm not entirely sure if I can commit, but I'll definitely think about it.
Thank you for the story comment! At first I was like: Oh my...how could she write something that mean? And then I was like: Oh my...she is so clever and witty! I love her :) hehe
Thank you for the comment! I'll remember that one. I have the intention of doing an extensive re-write, but I just don't have the time right now, but I'll definitely consider what you said and keep it in mind when I do get around to it.