August 24th, 2012 at 11:55pm
MGwrites / Comments
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Alright. Can you bring the notebook tomorrow so I can try to update if I have time to this weekend.August 24th, 2012 at 04:11am
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Oh, thank you for pointing that out=DAugust 20th, 2012 at 10:43pm
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I was experimenting with all the new buttons and may have accidentally recommended one of my old poems. You can just ignore it.July 6th, 2012 at 07:45am
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Thats because I had originally written it in first person and switched to third. I have an editor looking at it. Is the text too small?
Also, I'm not sure what you mean by "The story is interesting but I believe the line between enough and to much details has been crossed, it's begining to smother the story."
I understand my story needs work, however, before you tell me that my form needs work, please look at yours. I have no idea what you are trying to tell me in the sentence. What do you mean 'line between enough' and 'details crossed' what's so 'smothering.'
Please help me understand your 'form' so that I can edit my story. If you don't tell me where, how am I supposed to know?June 28th, 2012 at 10:17pm -
I updated Hush Hush, if you're still interested.
I know it's been about 7 months since since you've commented.June 20th, 2012 at 11:13pm -
They wouldn't say they just said they were planning to.June 18th, 2012 at 09:21pm
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YAY! They are putting Meredith in. Now I need to watch from the very first episode so I can catch up and watch Meredith on the show. How are they going to put her in though?June 18th, 2012 at 03:09am
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Looking back on my comment I can see how you would think that, I actually read the first ten or so chapters but no I didn't read all of it. For comment swap I think it's better if you put your shorter stories up instead of say 40 chapter long ones as it can look very daunting when someone who just wants a comment on their one shot has to read something like that. It was very late at night when I wrote that comment so I apologise if it wasn't up to the standard you were hoping forJune 17th, 2012 at 04:58pm
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hey I added a new chapter in Leah's Story if you would like to read it.June 10th, 2012 at 02:12am
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Hey, I was just saying, you're layout is the first thing people see and whether we like it or not, it's going to effect whether people read our story. And from what I've gathered from what you've said to other people who commented on your story, you need to take constructive criticism a little betterJune 10th, 2012 at 12:52am
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Thanks!June 10th, 2012 at 12:26am
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Thanks girl. Loved he comment and I am glad that you liked it.June 9th, 2012 at 04:59am
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COOL! AWESOME! ETC ETC. More exclaimitive adjectives!June 9th, 2012 at 04:47am
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hey girl. my fire elemental story for your contest is up. link is on the contest page.June 9th, 2012 at 03:13am
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He is a Shape shifting panther.April 4th, 2012 at 02:04pm
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Hope you like it. The next one for leah's should be up soon.April 1st, 2012 at 04:39am
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last chapter of my protector is up.March 31st, 2012 at 03:06am
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I know. The last chapter is going to be amazing!March 28th, 2012 at 02:32am
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Good morning Kramisha.March 24th, 2012 at 01:51pm
sure :)