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@ WolfGirl96
sure :)

Alright. Can you bring the notebook tomorrow so I can try to update if I have time to this weekend.

Oh, thank you for pointing that out=D

I was experimenting with all the new buttons and may have accidentally recommended one of my old poems. You can just ignore it.

Thats because I had originally written it in first person and switched to third. I have an editor looking at it. Is the text too small?

Also, I'm not sure what you mean by "The story is interesting but I believe the line between enough and to much details has been crossed, it's begining to smother the story."

I understand my story needs work, however, before you tell me that my form needs work, please look at yours. I have no idea what you are trying to tell me in the sentence. What do you mean 'line between enough' and 'details crossed' what's so 'smothering.'

Please help me understand your 'form' so that I can edit my story. If you don't tell me where, how am I supposed to know?

I updated Hush Hush, if you're still interested.
I know it's been about 7 months since since you've commented.

They wouldn't say they just said they were planning to.

YAY! They are putting Meredith in. Now I need to watch from the very first episode so I can catch up and watch Meredith on the show. How are they going to put her in though?

Looking back on my comment I can see how you would think that, I actually read the first ten or so chapters but no I didn't read all of it. For comment swap I think it's better if you put your shorter stories up instead of say 40 chapter long ones as it can look very daunting when someone who just wants a comment on their one shot has to read something like that. It was very late at night when I wrote that comment so I apologise if it wasn't up to the standard you were hoping for

hey I added a new chapter in Leah's Story if you would like to read it.

Hey, I was just saying, you're layout is the first thing people see and whether we like it or not, it's going to effect whether people read our story. And from what I've gathered from what you've said to other people who commented on your story, you need to take constructive criticism a little better

Thanks!

Thanks girl. Loved he comment and I am glad that you liked it.

COOL! AWESOME! ETC ETC. More exclaimitive adjectives!

hey girl. my fire elemental story for your contest is up. link is on the contest page.

He is a Shape shifting panther.

Hope you like it. The next one for leah's should be up soon.

last chapter of my protector is up.

I know. The last chapter is going to be amazing!

Good morning Kramisha.