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  • carry.me.home.

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    I like the new layout better. XD hey, would you want me to make you a banner?
    I can do that xDxD
    February 3rd, 2012 at 02:31pm
  • vanete.

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    Thank you so much for your story comment! I'm very flattered that you're enjoying the story, it's so much fun to write. I've actually seen a few episodes of The Walking Dead at my sister's insistence, so perhaps it's rubbed off a bit on my story x]

    Oh darling, I agree completely with how you feel about Molly. I absolutely adore her, so I hope you don't think otherwise because of how I've written her in [i]Tip[/i]. However, I can't make any promises right now, over anyone's lives for that matter. So we'll see ;D

    Again, thanks for reading and commenting!
    January 27th, 2012 at 12:19am
  • Erin.Grace.

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    Your welcome :) and thanks haha
    and okie doke :) I will make one when i get home from work this afternoon and send it to you!
    December 30th, 2011 at 11:38am
  • Erin.Grace.

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    Thanks :) and yes, I really do! I am also a really perceptive reader and catch on quick/make the conections from one event/person to another And remember even small details :) and yes, it seems A LOT more complicated!!! I've been trying to figure it out since I noticed it, but no hints have really been dropped about them lol well no hints about anything really!! WHich I love how you keep us in the dark with like this tiny crack of light, just big enough for us, the readers to strive to reach it! Which is a great way to hook readers :)along with making this cliche story totally un-cliche :)
    and yes, I can be your proof reader :) lol I've never done that for anyone on this site, other sites I have though. Loooove the character page too by the way, buuut Lucy's link doesnt have a hyperlink connected and under Craigs Bio, I think you meant to say "Anyone's feelings" not "Antone's feelings"
    also holy wow! some of those Bios, Im like wiat WHAT!?! Gotta keep reading to find out what you mean! haha because some of that hasn't even happened yet!! and I was wondering when Skylar was coming back into play with the story as well! he seemed like he was going to be a main character :) man soo man hot guys! Im sure at least one of them has to have a suspision that something isn't quite right with Lucy though!! and you should post a "Lucas" Profile so we can see how he looks
    so how do you want me to do the proof reading? sorry this is one long ass comment XD
    December 29th, 2011 at 03:49am
  • Erin.Grace.

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    :) you, my dear, are very welcome! You have some serious talent in you as well!! I'm am thrilled to have stumbled across this work of art :) I am extreamly picky when i comes to which stories I will subscribe to and STAY subscribed to and you have made the cut! If you take a look at the stories I have in my subscriptions you will see that is a high compliment (or I hope you would ;) ) I hope for an update soon! But I know how to wait for one (I have a story that only updates once a year, but is sooo wonderful I won't unsubscribe to it)
    anyways, How does a beta work then? I would be willing to help out :) I'm amazing at find small errors in others peoples writing (not so much my own, but other peoples for sure) :)
    December 19th, 2011 at 01:42am
  • dokkidokki

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    Please, don't. I should be grateful that you posted this, haha. However, I'm patient (or so I try to be) and will never unsubscribe to this. It's awesome.
    November 30th, 2011 at 01:56pm
  • C'est Moi C:

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    Hey. Sorry that it's been so long. I hope that you are doing well and I really enjoyed your story.
    May 26th, 2011 at 07:16pm
  • dokkidokki

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    I hate silent readers, so if I was I would hate myself.

    Uhm, I like her so far, a bit of a rebel. On the other hand, I am not really sure, it's hard to explain: I can't read her, and that is a good thing in my eyes. I don't know what she is going to do, so I'm always in for a new chapter. :]
    May 1st, 2011 at 07:33pm
  • demure.

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    thank you for the advice and I'm glad you liked it =). I'll be sure to describe her a bit more in the next chapter =)
    April 27th, 2011 at 03:39am
  • MusicIsMyLife6880

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    You're so welcome :)
    March 10th, 2011 at 12:43am
  • city lights;

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    Aw, thank you.
    I'm glad you liked it.
    I really appreciate it. c:
    March 8th, 2011 at 01:28am
  • dokkidokki

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    Your welkom. :) I'm pretty sure it will stay awesome. :P
    March 6th, 2011 at 06:39pm
  • Cerbera.

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    Thank you so much for the compliment. It's a fiction but I try to be as realistic as possible.
    November 11th, 2010 at 12:52am
  • C'est Moi C:

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    please come check out my writing contest
    http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/160405/
    September 12th, 2010 at 11:14pm
  • let's make a mess.

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    Hi! I knew you were a reader of my story, Welcome to the Games, so please read below:

    http://www.mibba.com/journals/read/201858/

    It's kind of important.
    September 6th, 2010 at 01:33am
  • when.you.were.young

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    I miss your story!!! Please update!! Life is just not the same without it!! Ok maybe i'm being a little mellowdramatic but still, i miss it sooooooooo much!
    August 4th, 2010 at 10:41pm
  • SuperOreoGirl

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    Hey! Great job on the last chapter it was very *gulp* 'gut clenching' though! lawl
    July 24th, 2010 at 09:18am
  • xThnksFrThMmrsx

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    No problem, more people definitely should check it out!
    And I was being an insomniac, so I pretty much started reading it in the evening and stayed up all night to finish, haha. It was great!
    I'm definitely going to continue reading! (:
    July 22nd, 2010 at 06:25am
  • ximone

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    You are my fave author! *super smile*
    July 21st, 2010 at 08:36pm
  • wickedchessie

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    thankyou so much for commenting my story! means alot to me!
    please update yours soon! im desperate to see what happens!
    im going to try and update mine every two days or so! :)
    thankyou for the big long comment as well! made me really happy! xx
    July 19th, 2010 at 10:39pm