Thank you so much for your comment, I think there's a whole lot of people who doesn't like reading my story, so it was nice to see someone new comment on my work :D
I think you're right..yes he stole her heart... someone said this to me too but I didn't paid any attention. In my free time I'm gonna try to add every titel and the banner correct. THANKS
And you can't imagine my face! I love hearing back from people, so know your response makes me giddy =D Thats great that you're learning fast, I like it. And she should be proud, because I- the English snob- like your story. So anyway, thanks for checking me out too, and let me know how you like "Tear the Sun..." <666
the song actually gave me the idea..weird ha I know. the clip has nothing to so with the story idea... but the music gave me the chilling dark gloomy underground club idea...and this came out so far. I'm trying to write a few more chapters... I hope you like them too and I hope you like a few of my other stories too. Please let me know what you think when you read them