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  • KiSs_Me_I'm_BrOkEn

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    mmhh yes...you are right about the POV thing. i guess i forgot to remove it because initially i had written it in first person but changed it to third afterwards.
    and thank you very much by the way. i appreciated that.
    oh and i'm currently working on another three stories so i might put another one up soon...anyways thank you :)
    April 6th, 2010 at 10:13pm
  • sicsempertyrannis

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    Thanks for the story comment:]
    I try to keep it as real as possible,
    So I guess I'm doin good:]
    April 6th, 2010 at 04:38am
  • KiSs_Me_I'm_BrOkEn

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    hey :]
    i finally (emphasis on the finally) put up my second chapter.
    if you get a chance, i'd like it if you checked it out.
    you helped me out before and it would be great if you did again.
    thanx
    April 5th, 2010 at 11:01pm
  • TheNight

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    lonely? with me here? impossible ! ;p
    horror tale... sounds interesting
    i barely have time for anything these days ;s midterms are staring at me in the face.. so it's all studying *sigh*
    BUT... i just posted the one-shot that's taken forever ;]
    April 4th, 2010 at 10:46pm
  • TheNight

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    hey homie !
    wat's up ? ;]
    March 31st, 2010 at 06:39pm
  • Monster!

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    oh ok thank you! ill edit it. ^^
    March 30th, 2010 at 07:11am
  • Monster!

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    lol thanks for the story comment. which part of the ending do i need to trim down? Alleck's or Paul's?
    March 30th, 2010 at 05:37am
  • flowersareforeating

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    Oh, I see, I see
    :]
    March 23rd, 2010 at 02:37am
  • Sheikara

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    Oh! Well, thanks!
    March 22nd, 2010 at 08:16pm
  • TheNight

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    HAH ! i totlly agree, let's stay where we are, i mean i know my writing isn't the best I barely started but my poem writing has improved because i started that first, but i believe that the more you write and the longer that better you get ;]
    Oh ! btw i read part2 of Testament, well written!
    i'm curious to see where you take this....
    March 22nd, 2010 at 03:09pm
  • flowersareforeating

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    Question. (actually a couple)
    Who's that in the picture?
    Where" Aland Islands?
    (I still can't find Virgin Islands although I could just Google it.)
    I know, I'm quite ignorant, even though sometimes it's on purpose.
    :]
    March 22nd, 2010 at 06:20am
  • TheNight

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    lol, maybe just a little jk ;p
    But ya i'm not the biggest fan of *cough-slash-cough* or too much fanfic.
    but at least i can find more serious readers here on mibba than other sites like Quizilla, ugh that was awful most of which were "Arranged marriage with a Vampire... but he's so hot! omg i'm am i in love with him ?!?!" <<< those were the titles, sad i know, (no offence on ppl who do like that stuff tho) ;]
    March 21st, 2010 at 01:26pm
  • TheNight

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    what's this? Philosophical dabbles? sci-fi ? vampires? oh my..
    i'm intrigued ;]
    but yea i think i kinda get what you mean, also i wrote this symbolic poem but i'm very reluctant on posting it on here... i don't think ppl will get it :s
    March 20th, 2010 at 05:28pm
  • Monster!

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    not that this particular charecter is sexy, just interesting. to me anyhow, i mean if you like mathamtical, obsessive stalkers i guess hes the guy. lol
    March 20th, 2010 at 02:54am
  • Sheikara

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    thanks for the comment! Feels nice when someone likes my stories!
    March 19th, 2010 at 03:38pm
  • TheNight

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    Hey srry itz taken me this long to reply,>,<
    Yeah me 2 ! i started writing Poems a couple years ago but only started writing actual stories or one shot last December (toyed w/ the idea for about 2 months till i finally got the guts to do it ;p)
    Oh ! and wat do u mean buy only light stuff? what else do u have *raises eyebrows* ;p
    March 19th, 2010 at 08:51am
  • Monster!

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    awesome! and why ouldnt he have fans? people seem to like creepy more and more now. *cough* *cough*
    March 19th, 2010 at 04:02am
  • Monster!

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    it was finished? D: lol i think you should continue it. ^^
    March 18th, 2010 at 04:51am
  • Monster!

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    thamks for another comment! when are you gonna update stopwatch?
    March 17th, 2010 at 05:01am
  • kellyxsmile

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    wow, thanks for the story comment! it encourages me:]
    hope you like how it turns out:D
    March 16th, 2010 at 11:13am