If your English isn't that great, then that's understandable as to why the grammar isn't that great. I honestly can't explain it because there is so much. I'm not trying to put you down at all, but you could get kicked off the site for it. They take grammar and stuff on here very seriously.
ROTFLOL i didn't even notice that. Seriously, i didn't notice that chapter 24 is steamy in BOTH parts of the series lol. I seriously laughed when you pointed that out. I can not believe that i didn't notice that lol.
But i'm glad that you did,
it lets me know that you guys pay attention in the story, and i [b]LOVE[/b] it.
writer's block SUCKSSS