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It probably was a couple of sentences. I don't know. It was in a message

It's fine if you don't. I know what ruts are like. Hence why it's been... multiple multiple months since I've even looked at one of my stories

I thought you had something for it? Or was I just dreaming?

Finished the mini card challenge for the writing cup
Just gotta wait for things to be posted

WORK ON CARCASS

Can't wait!

How are you today?

I wish, oh my god. If only I was that creative I almost never use my Twitter, but if I had that handle I feel like I would have to

Well don't I feel special!

That's fine. I totally get in those moods, and then I have to force myself to blog.

And you're welcome!
That's me stopping you

I'm good. Not enjoying the thunderstorm that's happening.

So how are those reviews going
How are you?

Sounds better than a hot pocket

Well thanks, that's my hope as well

What's Stromboli?
But no, don't force it if you don't want to!

I have the first chapter posted and tomorrow I guess I'm posting the second one. I'm so like... sort of terrified with this one. I feel like it's so incredibly different. I'm afraid that I'm not really doing the characters justice. We'll just have to see.

How are you today? And when the hell are you gonna update Carcass?

That was such a fantastic review. And you were right on several points. As soon as I finished it and had it posted I regretted immensely that I didn't go into detail about appearance. It is something I've been trying to make up for in the sequel, and what I hope to rectify when I actually go back and rewrite the story (because that has always been a plan). Joseph's action after being put in a choke hold is definitely something I'll change, as again, you're right.

I even agree with your assessment of the last chapter. It was an incredibly risky thing for me to do, and it honestly backfired. But like I said, I plan to rewrite the story at some point. I did originally plan to have it appear as a document, like someone was getting a report of what happened, but obviously, I didn't go down that route.

Thank you so much for pointing out the grammar mistakes as well! Just goes to show, even the finest tooth comb misses things. I'm glad you liked it.

You... 1600 words?! I'm almost scared to even receive it!
But I want to know what you think so I won't be cowed!

By the end you should just be awarded with some kind of medal or rank. Review God?
You'll have to let me know if there are any I should check out!

You can do it!

I have a horrible memory, so really you don't want to count on me for reminding you

But not much!

That me going to the internet!

Thanks! Now I have to figure out what thirty-fifty is in Russian. (The funniest thing is about me even using Russian numbers is I can just barely count to ten. Although 11-19 is really just saying those numbers and then the equivalent to teen.)

Do it! We'll have the prettiest posts!

Omg, my left EYEBALL WONT STOP TWITCHING

Ohhh okay. You should tell me how you did it 'cause it's really awesome and I wanna do it!

Thanks!

I just saw your post so I get what you mean now
I like how you just stopped at like 41 or whatever

Formatting your thread post?

My day was actually really good! What about yours?

Haha, well, I’m trying to be better about updating quickly rather than slowly. xD I’m glad to hear the update didn’t disappoint, though! And hah, as if that’s going to happen any time soon! (; But yeah, he did call her ‘Kitten’. He’s used it both ways in the past, so it could totally be either. (;

Thanks for the comment, love. You know I appreciate it! (: