Welcome to mibba :]
I really like your story.
There isn't really that much on it yet so I can't really say much, but it's attracting.
Not like most stories I've read on here.
Hello!
You seem to have a pretty good grip of this site already.
I shall read your story for you ;) And comment if thats alright.
So how is life?
I'm Darren by the way.