i see you sayin' high to new people. remember i'm a board whore so i notice things & hey! i'm not your first friend. :'( this makes me sadfacepanda. i'm 8th! D:
Hey, thanks for the comment. ^-^
You're absolutely right. I could've done a lot better with developing that... they both were originally written as song-drabbles, both written in under four minutes apiece.
Maybe one day I'll take you up on that idea and fix them up. But, either way, I appreciate your con-crit. <3