It's just that it's better if it was italicized. Besides, you write them in different POVs right? It would be better if it was italicized. It's just a thought. You don'thave to do it if you don't want to.
Oh, I wasn't disagreeing, just pointing it out! I guess I have a bit of a soft spot for all my characters :) Again, thank you so much for reading and I really appreciate the comments!
True, but we've all said awful things when we were hurt or angry. Hayden seems awful right now, but she just feels betrayed. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!