Dude, my eyes bugged out a little at the mention of Airway Heights and Spokane. I'm totally from Spokane...er, live there, not from...but anyway, it's pretty crazy that I just happened upon a story with characters from Spokane. Looking forward to updates.
Honestly, it's no problem :)
I know I would have appreciated the same thing when I was first starting a story. I actually was a bit scared that you would think that I was too opinionated, haha.
But either way, I really enjoy reading the story and like I said before; it's well written and it has quite a lot of potential, haha
I'll be looking out for the next update :)
xo