Kissmett / Comments

Lol of course I still wanna read it, yeah I am kinda scared 4 her but I'm not gonna stop reading cause ur story is kinda awesome!!

I finished a couple of days ago, but I can't delete myself from the author's list. Ha, sorry. Would you do it? c: <3

I'd say we can do it like on Old Mibba. Just add me as an author to the story, I'll add the layout, then un-author myself. c'x If that doesn't work (though it should) I'll figure something else out. And I'll have your other layout created shortly. Thank you for being so patient. <3

You are very welcome! :)

Well, I recreated one of your layouts, but tried making it more readable. It's just a suggestion, but what do you think of it: layout screencap. It's leaning toward my style of layouts, so I apologize if you don't like a few things. Ha, ha. cx

Ah, okay. c: Just tell me what you "fudged up" and I'll try my best to explain~. Or whatever you'd like me to do. Ha, ha.

okay. I wrote the story a long time ago. I'm really just editing it. Once I get to where I left off I will be able to make it sound more personal and it will hopefully make more since.

Yeah, it is supposed to be a fanfic. For some reason, that wasn't an option when I created the story, but I'll change that as soon as I can. Thanks for reading! -A

maybe it can be confusing if you just read the middle?
It's your choice, which chapter you read, and thankfully, that is extended to everyone else, including me.
Personally, I prefer to have the comment on the last/latest chapter, unless I had resently edited a chapter in the middle.
I'm sure there are all the various reasons for prefering this and that. we'll just have to recognice it, and respect the others, in this case 'you', for having a different opinion/preference?
In the end, it's for the author/writer, to make the best out of the comment, which's something I'll have to work with, just like you.
Same goes for making the comment, if you chose this chapter over that, it's up to you, to make your best effort, in making the comment as good as posible, and to count, even if you're only requied to make the 200 characters, and leave comments that are on topic?
Considering, I feel I may very well see more of you, regardless of this 1 story?

If memory serves me, the story is quite long, ane very extencive?
the swap stipulate for me to read 1 chapter, which I did.
I made my best to comment on it, in as constructive a way I could.
if this did not help, I can do nothing about.
Besides, you still need comments on the entire story? I know I myself desire comments on every chapter/story I write, and post here.
In the end, the later comments on the first chapters would just blend in, what was already said, I know I'm not alone on this sentiment.
For what I know, I suggested, what I saw could help, or be of some use?
If you have no errors, I cna't make them up, in order to find a complaint, so I say what I feel, while reading the story.
Furthermore, unless you express a desire for a specific chapter, you need help with, I choose the chapter I please. just like you choose the chapter you like to read?
Just ask the admin on the forum, if you like?

Thanks for the comment on "John Doe".
Sadly, these errors will be with me for quite the while, so I hope they don't rob the story of the spirit.
There was a point to the name, not sure if 'Doe' is a surename, which 'John' still is in large parts of the world. still, for some reason, this who he is.
If I am, it's for you to figure that out, while you're reading. Since you're likely to be back, so long as you're active with the swap. I think I could promise as much, as to say I have numerous of what this came from, left to post here.
That's 1 of the liberties with posting this story, I can choose a specific layout for him, and his events.
I like the structure in your comment here. makes it easy to pick out the details of what you say, and fit them against the story.

Thanks for your comment on The Protection of a God. I really like mythology too, obviously I'm writing a story about it, but haha anyway I really appriciated what you wrote. I agree with you, a layout would make it so much better. I'm trying to make one that I like so there should be one soon :)

It's just as easy to make up excuses, for oneself, as well as others.
I'm required to read, and comment on sa single chapter, of my choice, but I'm free to choose to read further, if I like to.
Just like youAre Note required to Apreciate my comment, even htough it would help you more.
On the other hand, if you had stated which story, with a thanks, you'd come out more favourable, not just to me, but to everyone reading the comment, which there are people who do.
Furhtermore, it'd be easier for me to clarify details, if I knew what story.
I can't keep trak of it, but you know which story.
I'm with the swap, to enjoy the reading, and get some help with my stories, just like I thus help others.

A greater is basically 75% angel and 25% percent human. A 'master' is a greater but has more power per say.

Yay! I'm so glad you liked my story Love Means Making Decisions. I'm going to try to get the next chapter out ASAP. :)

No problem. I did enjoy reading it :)

Ok I'm glad that made sense. I might clarify it in the next author's note too....

Hi there :) I just wanted to quickly reply to your comment on my story Loneliness. Yes, it sort of would have ruined the plot, but I guess I didn't make it clear why not. In my head (and hence this is something I should have noted somewhere in the story....) this was quite a bit in the past and they didn't have any medication for her, and therefore the big life struggle. Thanks for pointing that out, though :)

oh my gosh, STAWP EHHHHHHT! you're making me blush! (: but seriously, I'm so glad you like my writing! thank you so much!

thank you so much for the comment on Marilyn! :D
WAY TO MAKE MY DAY. SERIOUSLY.
I'm sure your writing is just as amazing!