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Well i like them :) hope you write more!

Ya i know what you mean lol i have to put some more poems in but i do like your work :)

Thank you for the comment :) I really like your story Three Last Months

I'm replying to your comment and while I appreciate your feedback, negative or mean feedback isn't what I was looking for. I'm sure you didn't mean any of your comment to come off as mean or disrespectful, but it was. I write for me, not for anyone else. And I do love the feedback I get. However, if I want to write about a sex scene, I have the right to write a sex scene out, because it's what I want to do. If you don't like the story, fine. Then don't read it. You don't have to leave mile long comment telling me everything that's wrong with it, when I'm sure there are more deserving stories on this website. So, forgive me if this is mean, nasty, or disrespectful. That is exactly how it was supposed to come off as. I know my story isn't perfect, and my characters aren't up to snuff, and my plot might be moving to fast for you. But since you are the only reader who has told me all of this, then I am going to keep writing the way I write. Because I write for me. And if that bothers you or anyone else, then to bad. Just don't read it.

Thanks for the comment on my story :) I hope it'll turn out good too!

Hey... Um... just to say... I think you might want to work on some of your Grammar. :P

Mine too. Maybe you could read them? I would say for you to read Keep Smiling. It is a lot better. The other one is for a contest!

Hey, how are you?

Thank you so much for the comment, it made me real happy :)

- Breee

some of mine are happy and sad! sometimes both!

so what kind of poems do u wirte?

lol hahaha

sorry if i hurt your fellings it is just i don't like those kind from poems lol

Ok =]
I'll see if I can get to it.
thanks for the comment and advice.
I thought it was too, but I had my friend read it and she said it sounded great..
and if I changed it she would kill me...
scurry vision =/

Wow, that does sound annoying. I mean, cleaning can be fun when you feel like it, but damn xD
Sometimes makes you wish you could make your parents understand that they don't own you.

And awesome about the bunny for your niece, I bet she'll love it ^^

Aww, alright. I hope you get some sold then, that'd be really cool ^^ You should take pictures of them and show them off on the internet, could sell them that way too =)

What all else has been going on?

Oh, sounds great. I bet they are adorable!
I hope you get to sell some and have fun =)

Awesome, those are some really good metaphors, perfect wording.
You are very good at poetry ^^
You're welcome.

How are you?

Thanks for the poem comment! Your are great!!!

Yes they were all posted in about a minute. Um I do have more but I have to get them onto my laptop.

I will read your poems in the next couple of days.