Cupcake Violence / Comments

Thanks so much for your story comment! It actually made my night :) Im glad SOMEBODY enjoys my story!!!

Hahaha that would be interesting, wouldn't? Yeah, that would be mean if we didn't give them food or water.
you're welcome! I love Once Upon A Time! :DD
awww thank you, I didn't make it at all. It is very nice, though. :)

:D No, that's fine to like him. There's just that many people who do. :)
Nate would probably give you a hug and probably keep on denying that he has this "feelings" towards Rosemary. hahaha lol
You shall see. :) And thank you soooo much for commenting and subscribing! :DD
I love your layout! :)

Thanks a bunch for your comment on my story. I should update very quickly, and I hope to have this novel halfway done by the end of May. LOL, crossing my fingers! I cannot tell you how much I appreciate when people comment, it helps fuel my writing, and I don't feel like I am only writing for two people and myself!

Hmmm...I like the indecision there.

Actually, I'm going to try to explain some things in the story. There'll be spoilers, though. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.

I don't know. This story actually takes place starting a year before the book's beginning and will probably end with the book's end.

I haven't planned this out.

Uhm, anyway, thanks for subscribing/commenting. :)

Thank you SO SO SO SO SO much for your story comment. I'll mention you in the A/N for the third chapter. It's really appreciated, just in case I didn't get the point across XD

Sure, I would love it if you could help me make a layout for my story. xD
And that's alright. You gave me a comment and that's what I had asked for so I couldn't be happier. It's strange though, isn't it?

Thanks for the comment on my story 'Mansion Inheritance.'
I haven't figured out how to make my own layouts yet so I haven't made any. As for the ones that are already provided, that one is the only one I like. Sorry if you don't like it. *shrug*

Thank you for the comment! You'll just have to wait and see what happens. ;)

well badass is probably the obvious thing that comes to mind when thinking about Ares, so it was a good twist.

I went over the entries quite a few times but I've judged it now;
http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/172683/

No problem. I used to write like that and when my mom said, you know, you're not supposed to write it like that, I felt so...stupid.

"“Don’t! Ask! Stupid! Questions!” She was accentuating every word with a punch to Nick’s rapidly reddening arm.

This is an example of when you DO capitalize the first word. Because the second sentence isn't part of the first. I recommend googling "Writing dialogue" and reading up a little. It doesn't hurt.

One thing to say about your story, since I'm not sure if you wanted a thorough critique, is that you need to work on your comma useage a little bit. If you follow the link I've provided (skipping that appositives crap) and just skim the basics, it'll make your writing look way more professional. Also, when doing conversation, make sure you're not doing fragment sentences.

"You're wrong." He said---isn't correct. It's all one sentence and should be: "You're wrong," he said. If it isn't followed by 'he said' or 'she said', etc, then you just use a period. You do, however, still use exclaimation points and question marks. "What are you doing?" he asked. So, basically, just don't capitalize that first word after the quote. It's a little confusing, but it makes your writing look much more impressive.

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm

Sure, I'll give your story a read. Also, little editor's note, I didn't mean to say her Aunt Chris got married. Just fixed it, but JEEEZ could I have made a more stupid editing mistake?

Hey, I have a new story coming up. Just wanted to see if you were interested. It's going to be another Jackson one.. Like always:3

Here's the link if you wanna check it out: http://stories.mibba.com/read/444876/Philosophy-of-a-Dancer/

LOL Yes, yes her name is rachael XD

Oh dude, you can word it badly if its about Rachael XD

I'm getting there, I'm just trying to get my head start back XD

Awww poor Johnny *hugs*

How about Johnny, he's a giant shoulder to cry on type in this :)