I'm glad that you liked it! And yes, I'm sorry about having that in there, but don't worry, he's gonna make everything all better... once he calms down...
Thanks for the comment. And yeah I try my best to make them not corny but it's not the fact of them being strong and invincible. There is an unknown force making them act differently and more human and teen like and they can't fight it off no matter how hard they try and Jacob, and soon others, are the only ones who notice their weird behavior.
But trust me, in the next few chapters, you'll really get to see the vampire/werewolf attitude that they naturally have in the Twilight series :)