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thank you so much for the comment on the story :)

Aw thank you so much, that has absolutely made my day

Yep! I'm trying my best. School is aaaaahhhh!!!
Do you know when you'll be updating The Road Ahead?(:

Super busy! I barely have any time to get on mibba :(

How you doin' sweetie? (:
I felt like I needed to catch up with ya ;D

Thank-you darling(:
Aha, so how are you ?

No, don't say that!
I'm sure it'll be fine! ;D

Man, I can't wait(:
It looks like you have an excellent story a brewin' (;
Woot! I get to be your first subscriberrr!

Woot woot! I love tips! :D

And I'd love to read one of your stories(:
Just give me a holler once you've posted something.

Haha yeah, I agree. The taxi cab, and Evie's personality are both pretty cliched and overused. Dax's 'I hate the world' attitude is pretty common too.

Thanks, though. You gave me a confidence boost(: A lot of the authors on here make their story really dark, intricate and deep (?), and I'm just not good at that :p It always has to be light. In the beginning at least.

I try my best to add some originality to the story ;]

Thanks for the story comment(:
It means a lot(:

About the beginning, how do you think I can improve it ?