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Jeeij!! :D

oh its okay :) i understand

nice to meet you caroline :) im fine to0 thinking of updating my story ..

do you mind reading it and commenting?

so .. how are you? by the way , nice to meet you. I'm Christelle^^

Hey! i just happened to pass by your profile and i decided to say hi ..so hi!

Hi! I was the one who commented on Edith... I guess I was wondering why the dude was leaving and whose fault it was or something. :)

I love that film. If it's the one I think you're on about. With Will Smith?
But yeah, great idea. I love how you're planning this all so well. :D
I kinda started writing a preliminary prologue type thing. It was just a random idea and only about a paragraph or two but I wouldn't mind doing it.
Sooo... characters. Which POV do you want to write from?
Ooh, I have an idea. We could draft up like character profiles and then sorta take it from there.
I feel like writing from a guy's POV. Just 'cause that would be fun. But I don't mind.

There could be... more than two of 'em. There could be eight couples or something to limit the relatedness.
Haha, it is. You have the fun of making them insult each other and then getting them together. Cute. But funny. XD
We could just kill the unimportant people we don't mention. Our main characters all survive. How does that work?
I like The Y Chromosome. But the product name idea is good.
Hmm. It could be called... The Man Making Machine. But that's just lame. XD
Umm, it could be Boys R Us until we think of a better one.
Now, characters. POVs. Would we alternate characters/chapters? Or just write in third pov to allow for multiple changes, like for the heartbroken girl, the resistance, etc.
So much to plan. :D

Your idea is way better. But things don't have to go back to normal. Everyone could die except for like one boy and one girl who AT THE START hated each others' guts but then kinda like each other and have to get together for the good of the human race.
Kinda like a modern day Adam and Eve, I suppose.
I LOVE THIS IDEA.
But, but, what would it be called?

We can be nerdy together.
Ooh, lemme think. There are no boys born in the world, only women, because women mate with women and since women only have XX chromosomes, they can't make men.
Ergo, they have to be grown to specifications. Women can go down to their local BoysRUs (XD) to decide on their perfect mate and hey presto, they're made.
But there's like a resistance who are trying to get men and women to mate again because there's something wrong with the 'grown' men.
A big fight ensues and everything goes back to normal. Ish.

I don't know. I'm crap at thinking up plots.
What do you think should happen?

Grammar school is clever people school. You have to pass an exam and stuff. Yeah. I'm a geek.
I always tell him he's just jealous. XD Thanks.
Ohmigod I was just thinking that. We should so cowrite a story about BoysRUs/Boyway.

My brother makes fun of me for being smart and geeky 'cause I go to grammar school. Is sad.
OHMIGOD THERE SHOULD TOTALLY BE A BOYSRUS.
There could be a checkout where you type in what you want and then they make a boy exactly the way you want. Like Subway. Or... Boyway? Okay, I fail.
I like this idea too much.

My brother knows pretty much nothing when it comes to computers. Me and my dad are the computer geeks in my family. :D
I shouldn't be proud of that but I am.
Well, I'm not arguing with you there. You are very brilliant.
Boys do the stupidest things sometimes. It never ceases to amaze me.
Boy-shopping! They could meet our exact specs.
I'm in love with this idea.

*beams superpowers through computer to laptop*
There. Is it fixed yet? No? Damn. I'll have to work on my abilities.
Ah, right. I don't drink either, so that would be a problem. People go wacko on alcohol.
I think I'm missing something here... wrapping? XD
But I like the idea of returning someone if you don't want them any more.
NO, I ASKED FOR GREEN EYES. NOT BLUE.
Yeah.

There was a dramatic vibe there. XD
I sad. I wanna use my super fix it powers! Lol.
Meh. Maybe. Boys seem like more hassle than they're worth.

Thanks. :) Though I'm not sure I wanna be like Nicole. I'd rather be like Reuben, but he's too cool.
Hehe, I shall have to make sure I put it up quickly. Ish. Though waiting [i]is[/i] said to be good for the soul.
[i]And I will try to fix youuuuuuuuu...[/i]
Sorry that song just came into my head when I read that. XD
Nah, I don't have a boyfriend.

Bah. I wrote out a big long comment and then the computer restarted itself on me. Let me try again.

It was a bit fillerish, sorry. There was more plotty stuff in it but then it was like twelve pages long so I split it in half. Plot stuff in next chapter, uh huh. :)
Nicole's a bit dim, but I love her 'cause she reminds me of me.
I like the way you've summed him up. XD He sounds like a poor tortured soul. Which he kind of is. Kinda.

Love me. I'm updating now. ;)

Aw, poor you. Have my sympathy. :D
Well, when you say it like that, I suppose you're right. I don't even know where it's going half the time.
And thankies, I love the story so much it's nice to know I'm not the only one.
I may even put it up tomorrow if I get time. :) How much would you love me then?
Lol. Joke.

Psh, there's nothing wrong with being a little bit crazy. My mum always says that a little dash of insanity makes the world go round.
HELLO KAROLINE. I'm a brunette too! Dyed it red for a while but it's faded out now.
I feel like I'm spoiling your fun - spoilers and all that. Though, I haven't said anything explicitly.
My mum's like that. She guesses everything. Especially mystery stuff. Kewl.
You shall be surprised... I hope. Meh. This probably won't turn out anything like how I want it to.
I shall make it my personal mission to have updated by Sunday evening. Maybe even Saturday, though I've got a lot to do so that probably won't happen.
BUT SUNDAY SHALL. PROMISE.