learing how to write Japanese that is not romiji will take me years. Your new story seems interesting another story that is something quite like that is the Passion Paradox and the Dark Triad their about pyschopaths so if you're into that you should check it out.
It's not that French is bad I'm just so use to english and how different it is grammatically plus I would rather be learning something like Japanese. But I sure wouldn't mind going to France though.
hahah it's totally understandable.
and thank you for not being mad, because a lot of people get mad when you give them constructive criticism, even though they say they want it. >.<
It's totally okay that there are some mistakes there not htat major
and I just randomly stu,bled into Susan Coffey once
Callia also sounds like she could look like you.
But you did and thats all that matters!
Please update again today?
Please, you'll make my day if you do.
Pleaaase :]
*puppy dog eyes
PLEAAASE.
I'll advertise your story for you if you do