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I just had not quit imagined this was what was the outcome of the action.
unless you meant 'quite' the sentence doesn't make sense.
[b]Ofcause,[/b] there is no way I can leave the box.
Ofcause is not a word.
I suggest you use the spelling check mibba had provided. :) it's really easy.

Aside from the possible difference between english and anglic, there are a few words purposefully spelled differently, to make a point.
If you'd please give me samples,
I could check out what is actually a genuine typo?
Actual errors in spellings only look silly or worse.

yeahhh.
Okay. LOL
one more time
I'm not saying anything about the layout at all.
I'm talking about the paragraphs.
Not layout.
But if the you're comfortable at how you're writing the story, go ahead. I was just simply suggesting. Good luck. :]

Skimming through your Prison Barn and found that you have a few spelling errors, perhaps you should go over the chapters. :) Good luck.

Alright I guess nevermind then

Thanks for the comment, glad you like my stuff

Well ummm yea I don't really have anything to pin point that I'm confused about except the whole concept of the story, your grammar is really bad and it makes no sense to me at all sorry if that seems harsh I just I don't know

Just the whole thing like I was constantly confused when I read

I really cant just leave. I don't mind your suggestions, but I get them all year so it's not a big deal anymore. I just had a few really bad ones but they are probably not associated with allergies anyways

For The Professor's Daughter? Well, the idea came from a book by Eva Ibbotson called The Morning Gift, I love that story and actually I enjoy all of her books. Otherwise I'm not too sure, I don't really get inspiration from stories on here or anywhere else really, more from listening to music or just thinking about the story whenever I can. Then the ideas kind of form, I guess I've always been a bit of a day-dreamer! But stories I do enjoy on here? There's one called Adore but I can't remember the authors username, it's about a girl called Ellen. And another called Aurora, (again I don't know the username) but that's a beautiful story too. Thanks for your question, Lexi

oh and about what stories I enjoy... um... I love fantasy - just letting go of reality and entering an entirely different world. Then I also like Horror books, but not movies - the anticipation in a book is just the best, never knowing what happens next or if they make it or not... it just isn't conveyed that well in movies (although I LOVE movies over all). I also don't despise a Sci-Fi story every now and then... but on Mibba I go for the Original Slash stories, or Werewolf stories and every now and stories with good original titles... such as, "There's an Angel in my bed, Literally" - has a nice story as well.

To be honest I don't really know. There are all kinds of good stories that differ so extremely tat its really hard to name what components actually make it into a good story... I guess to name a few, I'd say the Character development - without a character that gets some reaction out of the readers the story won't grasp you. Also the plot is semi-important - its what makes the reader interested in the first place. Another one is Writing technique - its not the most essential, but when its written badly, not many people will actually feel the need to read on. The most important in the Writing part however, is that you are able to convey the emotions. Without emotions no story will ever leave a mark in the reader and cannot be considered a good story...

So... in the end I'd say the emotions is the most essential part - scary, happy, sad, confused. They are what holds the story in place and can make it an unforgettable experience for the reader.

Hope that all made sense and answered you comment XD

thank you ^

I have a knee brace and I still dance as usual so. :)

I mean there's no quick easy solution. It's not healed because it's not an injury. It's a matter of the way my knee is. As I grow and the muscle around it gets stronger, then the knee cap will stop moving so much. But for now I have to deal with it

Oh no it's called patellofemoral pain syndrome. It's when your knee cap rubs against your bone and and everything between. It has to get stronger as I grow until it stops hurting completely. I still dance regardless

Nothing really but time. The syndrome I have can't really be healed

thank you for that comment ^-^ it really made my day!

Yes. Yes it shall

Worship of nature, really. I haven't delved that deep into it yet.