Ghost Writer. / Comments

I just wanted to let you know that I recently created a website. It's actually turned out pretty well so far.
http://www.thefreshpen.com
The site is all about becoming the best writer you can be. You can post your work there, and have it critiqued by your peers. I have had a few of my own works critiqued and the insight is very helpful. All of the critiques are done through a new comment system on the page. There is also a forum where you can chat with all of your friends on the site. You should definitely look into it. If you are interested in writing for the site, or if you have suggestions, please let me know. I would love to hear ways to improve... Thanks! :D

PS: Please check out my new piece, "The Touch of Sadim," and let me know what you think. Thanks! :D

u like it there?

yea.its cool.lots of friends there and pretty good life.but my parents give me lectures on my style.so that sux.wat bout u, wherever u live?

im sry bout that.

hey.whats up?

Ha. It's fine
I'm madddd tired
So I'm going to go for a walk to wake up
Later Angel

hi!
whats up?

aww i'm sorry that sux =( mine's gonna end on monday too

doing pretty good just chilling right now =) lol how's ur summer?

eh, its no prob.
its nice to get comments when your new.

Awe thank you. ^_^


*Lonna

I love your name. I used to watch a show called ghost writer.

hey ashley! ur welcome! so how r u??

hi welcome to mibba! hope you like it here! my name is sarah =)

hi lo
ima hayley
welcome to the mibbs!

Hey, I'm April. Funny, i've never heard anyone say they hate television. Not that I oppose.

heyy oic well. if u need any help just ask k!
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Go to MySpace and click on the banner thing.

It's awesome.

Sorry you couldn't go...

i love your username :]
im courtney!

Yep!

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Sorry, I'm rambling...