writing a new story. I'm determined to finish this one since it'll only be a few chapters long, but I need some feedback, people. So how about a comment swap?Here are the rules:1. You comment first.2. No fan fictions.3. Give me more than a few words please!Here's the URL:http://stories.mibba.com/read/403471/The-Toy-Soldier-with-a-Lead-Heart/please enjoy. It's short and I'm still working on the...

Dear Reader,Lately I've been having trouble finding books, stories, and manga to read. I'm rather exhausted of the typical plots and story lines. I am sick of the cliches, the gooey romance, and the predictable endings. I want something different. I want something to read where the characters are original with spicy personalities. I want the plot to twist and turn. I want to be on the edge of my...