Colors of Slumber / Comments

hey, it's one of the authors of the story "Deadly Little Secrets" Idk if you remember, but that author and I are doing another story together, if you want to read it, its called Worlds Collide.

Hey :)
It's me Jessica, I just decided to keep in touch with the people who commented on my story.

How are you?

Hey, can you keep udpating 'The Betting Exchange'? It's very rather good. :)

I just got your other comment. Thank you for that one as well.

Thank you for the comment!

Thank you for the comment on my story :)
Yeah, my flaw in my writing is that i don't capitalize my i's [like now]
I type about 103 wpm so i don't really push the shift that much.

I'll think about it.
The hard part is that most of my stories are mainly dialogue, y'know?

Thank you so, so much for the comment ^^
It's been so long since anyone has said anything of it!
The Prologue was supposed to be more short and to the point; The Forge isn't supposed to be as lively as everything else. and I tried to make that reflect in the way it was written ^^
And I'm working on it as we speak :) Almost to page 30 by Microsoft Word~

Thank you! I'll try my best! ;D

Lol yeah I noticed that. like I said in the story Charlie isn't really that much of a outgoing person on the outside when it comes to people she doesn't know well, and she is thinking of the stuff she is because her mind wanders a whole lot like mine does so yeah...

I made her kind of random in the head becasue I am XD

Yeah some of them are based on my opinions others on my friends so yeah :/

but anyway thank you for the comment it was much appreciated :)

hah thanks :D I'm not really sure if you'll like it when he gets his girl. It's uhh not the nicest thing i guess? I'm trying hard not to spoil it ! ahha.
Updates shall be soon! I plan on making it an everyday thing. I'm not sure though. Thanks so much for your nice words! :D they totally made my day!

You're quite welcome!

Thank you for the comment!
And indeed, I've gotten that from a lot of people.
I think I still need to improve my writing a bit.
There are still some flaws D:
But thanks for saying that anyways.
Im going to read your story now (:

Thankfully Visual Art is my strongest point! and yes, I think it would have beautiful art to go with it... sun sets and fields, wild flowers and fluffy clouds, and lovely charters as well

ok, deadly little secrets is moving quite fast and my co-writer is one chapter 7 right now. um if you could post what u think of each others writings that would b totatlly awsome. :)

thank you very much. (:

You're welcome and we hope that you like chapters 4 and 5.

Thankyou for you comment on my story, Feathers and Fur. I'ts suppost to be a picture book... but of cause, there is no option for picture book on mibba. I really want to get it published but I don't think i'ts good enough and picture books writen with bittersweet style just don't get published... ={

Thanks for the comment on L'ange de la Mort! It was fun writing it with somebody else. I hope you enjoy the rest of it.

This is the other author of Deadly Little Secrets and I just want to let you know that the 2nd chapter is finished. :)